rate_review Reviews

wonderful. truly. the emotions, the thrill of the upcoming battle, all of it is so exciting. i can't wait for the next chapter!!

Wow...very hot! Keep going!! XD

::wiggle of joy!!:: i love this story!! the plot is getting so intense...

Ch 31, yay! It was great! I love the way you portray Naruto and Sasuke because they're so in character, the only little tid bits that seem OOC also seem realistic! And the thing about Naruto supporting Sasuke and that whole theme you have going on, I LOVE it! And it reminded me of the opening song for episodes around 120 that sang "Sadness will run down our cheek, and become a river of tears" whlie showing Naruto and Sasuke (even the kiss*!) "This trembling feeling will become a strong whirl and melt into each other" Yeah... and it did really look like they were melting into (the clips that went with the song) Cute, but sad (those epsidodes) And there so many other wonderful things about your story, but sadly I have a short-term meory (not literaly, then again, maybe) So I shall countinue reading for now. =D

SD&FA

Phew, for a while there I thought you were going to make Naruto or Sasuke the Otokage.

Oooh, I hope they kick Itachi and Kisami's butts!

I have been following this story from the start and just wanted to tell you how impressed I am with your growth as a writer. This chapter showed an amazing sense of depth and clarity, giving life to the raw emotional turmoil that Sasu is experiencing right now. The love scene was some of the most intensely realistic works I have seen on AFF. In me you have a devoted fan... I will continue to check daily for your updates!!!!

ps. just wanted you to know that if I had my way... Sasu would win the fight but leave Itachi alive (why kill someone when you have proven that you can defeat them, who is Itachi if he is no longer the prodigy, the best, the strongest? How will he react when the brother who is supposed to punish him for his sins walks away). I would have Naru be seriously injured, waking up a month after the fight to find out that Sasu is pregnant and has been raising Naru's "adopted son" alone...yeah, I tend to get carried away *blushes* .... anyway I L-O-V-E this story... Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ohhh Sasuke - you put ths wide grin on my face with this update you really did, i know it's all tense and everything because things are about to happen now but Sasuke's last line made me feel so happy! If only he'd snap to attention like that in the canon *sigh* can't always have hat we want can we? and that 'aawafoo' (I wrote it worng lol) I was like awwwwww teme!!! Made me real proud *nods* yes it did - even if Naruto didn't understand it. And the smex was heh - you don't need me to tell you it was good right? I'll say it just in case - SMUT WAS GREAT!!!

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Hina xXxx

Good smut versus evil, EEEEVIIIILLL cliffy of DOOM. I'd say this chapter balnced itself out.

I love you. Does that make you want to write faster? No. Well maybe it does, but does it give you the right momentum... probably not. But I love you, in a worship-from-a-distance sort of way. I think this chapter was longer then some of the ones you've posted recently, and I'm not complaining! Just observing. Too tired for a proper review, but I'll have more oportunities as you update. :D Your awesome, and I think your worshiped by more than 80% of the Naruto fanfiction audience. Your just too good. Makes all us crappy authors look bad. :P

The End.

Wow that was hot!

And yet so sad at the same time because I think Naruto is right in thinking that even if Sasuke defeats his brother there will still be issues for him to overcome.

And have you read the latest manga chapters?Because the same sorta thing is happening with Sasuke going after Itachi now.But sadly Sasuke is taking his new team instead of his dobe...

Which is exactly why I am loving this story more than the manga right now :)