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for The Sound of Dreams

by Zrina

person Lin
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story as always. Can't wait for the next chappie. This story is one of my 5 faves here. It makes crappy days at work worthwhile.

If you can, please create an enemy nin named Karin and killed her off for me. PLEASE!!!!!!
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man, the last part of this chapter had me grabbing the Kleenex! *sniff* It almost, ALMOST I tell you, makes me dread the chapters to come. But deep down I love reading angsty stuff, so it's all good! This chapter was great and I wait with bated breath until the next one's posted. Keep up the great work!
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heh Naruto makes a lot of sense *nods* Sasuke's slowly learning :D wich is good, one can only hope he does the same in the manga but hey. Aww Sai with Hiroki was sweet :)!!!And now Akatsuki is here to ruin the day I can't wait to see how it's all going to go. :D

Hina xXxx

p.s. lool the comment on Shino and his bugs was great :D
person animehead
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I freaking love this story so much...

And it is fine that you will probably only be able to update once a week. I mean you've given us 50 chapters and you're still going strong so we all love you for that.

This chapter was touching, like a scene out of a movie. Those two just make my heart clench. I'll keep reading as usual.
person RoseHime
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Itachi's in the picture! GAH! I'm bouncing up and down here! This was another great action/politics type chapter. It's great how you're able to weave so many different elements into this story. Then we have the cute sasunaru bit at the end. <3 Naruto really is good at dealing with people. He'd make a good Hokage, with Sasuke there to add his two cents of course. I don't know if I've said it before, but I really love your portrayal of Shino. Most stories just have him as "the quiet one" who doesn't really do anything. But I think you've captured him quite well. *good-guy pose* Good Job!
person Makkura Arashi
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay!! you reached fifty!! that's so cool!! i can't wait for you to update and i'm glad naru stopped sasu from leaving!! i have to run but great chapter see ya around!1
Taa
person lonelylulaby
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, thanx for another great chappie I really enjoyed reading it. I wonder what shall happen in the coming chappies will naruto bee captured and sasuke must save him. Or will they defeat itachi and get the son back safely w/out any hold-ups. Also I wonder when the shinobi will figure out that Hiroki isn't normal.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Sasuke's going to be on top again!!! hehehe Great chapter! It was cute when Sai had his little talk with Hiroki. It seems like Hiroki likes Sai now since he fell asleep on his lap. I'm glad that it was Sai and not Hinata that had that moment with the boy. Looks like they will be meeting Itachi alot sooner than they had thought they would. I sure hope neither Sasuke nor Naruto die!!!
person Shosuro
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You tease us with the talks of the next chapter being lemon and then on top of that you tell us that you are cutting back how many times you will post to once a week? Argh!! That was the only thing that would make the days fly by. Sigh......so does this mean that your next update will be next Tuesday? ....I don't think my heart can take this heart break.......

.....now that I got some of the Emo out of me, I love this chapter. Everything seemed to real. Like the actual characters would be saying and doing these things. I love Sai! He is sooooo awesome. Hey I have a question though....When you finish with this story are you going to be doing another? Because if you are let us know so that we can be waiting for that one too! I would wait by the computer for your next chapter and next story if you make one.

XXXOOOXXX
person ursan-canine
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
alright! the beginnings of smut!!! ehehe... good pacing. it's not too fast and it's not too dragging. :D keep it up~~~