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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh God you're making me so sad... I'm happy that you said about 20 more chapters though, that was good :). And I'm guessing that one a week will be Tuesday's? Oh well, I'll look out for it.
The scene with Sai and Hiroki was cute :), I like how he tried to explain, about the nindo and the Good Guy Pose XD.
So Akatsuki took the Daimyo's son. For an audience with Orochimaru, I wonder what they're up to... :sigh: Anyway we all know that wasn't the main scene or the reason I'm so sad. So Sasuke's finally growing up huh :) and accepting his feelings. Cause he thinks Naruto's going to die? Or does he think he's going to die? Please don't let anybody die. :sigh:
The next chapter promises to be somewhat heartbreaking, That terrible kind of sweetness, that makes me want to cry. Well they're due for some vanilla anyway :). I'm actually kind of glad that Sasuke gets to top, and from me that's odd cause I'm all about Naru-seme. But I had a conversation with a gay friend once about the entire issue of Seme vs Uke. He said that it's not about dominance or who's in control of the relationship. I always thought that being uke would be better, and he said yeah it's wonderful cause it's all about you, and then he said, but... seme is the place to be if you want to express your feelings, if you want to show or prove that you love someone. It's about time Sasuke took the plunge and expressed his feelings the right way. So I'm really happy, even though I'm kind of sad. I'll be good and try not to worry.
Huggles, Allys.
The scene with Sai and Hiroki was cute :), I like how he tried to explain, about the nindo and the Good Guy Pose XD.
So Akatsuki took the Daimyo's son. For an audience with Orochimaru, I wonder what they're up to... :sigh: Anyway we all know that wasn't the main scene or the reason I'm so sad. So Sasuke's finally growing up huh :) and accepting his feelings. Cause he thinks Naruto's going to die? Or does he think he's going to die? Please don't let anybody die. :sigh:
The next chapter promises to be somewhat heartbreaking, That terrible kind of sweetness, that makes me want to cry. Well they're due for some vanilla anyway :). I'm actually kind of glad that Sasuke gets to top, and from me that's odd cause I'm all about Naru-seme. But I had a conversation with a gay friend once about the entire issue of Seme vs Uke. He said that it's not about dominance or who's in control of the relationship. I always thought that being uke would be better, and he said yeah it's wonderful cause it's all about you, and then he said, but... seme is the place to be if you want to express your feelings, if you want to show or prove that you love someone. It's about time Sasuke took the plunge and expressed his feelings the right way. So I'm really happy, even though I'm kind of sad. I'll be good and try not to worry.
Huggles, Allys.
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Puhlease ma'am, may I have some more?
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow *fans self* that last bit was hot! *fans self more* Nice job and I love, love, love what you did with Hiroki (spelling?) That kid is very cute and who needs Mpreg when you've got adoption? So now we finally see Itachi and are going to confront him. *sniffs* I smell chaos. As for the number of chapters to come, take however long or short you need. After seeing Rumiko Takahashi, creator of Ranma 1/2 and Inuyasha, kill both series by just not letting go, I am a firm believer in letting the story dictate the length. Do what needs to be done and I can't wait til Saterday.
A.S.
A.S.
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
>.< aww sasuke!! I can't wait to see what happens. Keep writing!
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn, now i'm gonna be checking everyday for the next chapter! i'm gonna have to go looking for something else to tide me over until you update. this sucks. i'm so dependent! just update soon (and it better be HOT!) good job so far, i love how long the story is XD
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I so enjoyed the intenseness of your story. You describe their (Naruto and Sasuke) feels so well. I feel as if I'm feeling it too. The lust, pain and most of all the love they share. I think I said this before but, your story is Great and the smexyness is HOT! I look forward to two updates a week.
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Such a sexy ending you tease!
I am really really looking forward to the next chapter!
I am really really looking forward to the next chapter!
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yet another great chapter! The ending was perfect. Even though you did not write the sex out; sometimes it is just better off that way.
I know you are the writer of this, and I am usally not one for a happy ending, but PLEASE DON'T LET SASUKE OR NARUTO DIE!!! I feel like a little fangirl, but come on don't do that to me.
I know you are the writer of this, and I am usally not one for a happy ending, but PLEASE DON'T LET SASUKE OR NARUTO DIE!!! I feel like a little fangirl, but come on don't do that to me.
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm, poor sasuke! he doesn't want naruto to die and naruto won't let sasuke die alone! will you have them die together? or will you give this story the bittersweet ending it deserves? will you let them be as happy as they could be? to live with their issues and take whatever happiness they could get? there lives are in constant dangerous being what they are and i think they deserve to be happy! but then again even if they do die perhaps the moments they spend together would have been worth it? still i would rather it be a happy ending as happy as war and violence and two males can be together in such a world. I'm gald that you are still updating twice a week! i almost cried when i read that you would only do it once a week! i need your story to get me through my boring day! it brings a smile to my face!