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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw, the beginning scene with Sai and Hiroki was so cute! "The nice guy pose." Ha, loved it.
You're doing a great job so far and I can't wait to see what happens next. It's a good idea that you're pushing back updates; giving yourself time to write is a good thing. Forcing out literature never works for me.
Keep it up!
You're doing a great job so far and I can't wait to see what happens next. It's a good idea that you're pushing back updates; giving yourself time to write is a good thing. Forcing out literature never works for me.
Keep it up!
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is pulling my heart over the rocks. If you don't update soon I'm liable to explode!
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No no no no no!!!! Last time Sasuke was seme, so now it is Naruto's turn!!! ;D sorry, I know you have probably already written it, but I am just so sick of SasuNaru! Great story though! I cant wait to see what happens next!
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this has to be one of the best NaruSasu fics I have ever read.I have been reading all the chapters for like 4 days now and I just finished chapter 49 and its kept me glued to my computer screen im just amazed at how IC everyone is and the story is amazing.I actually enjoy your storyline more than the manga right now.I also have a feeling that manga is gonna have a sad ending.
Its amazing that you update 2 times a week a lot of writters dont even update that much a month!So if you have to update only once a week im sure people wont mind to much:)
Thanks for writting such an amazing story Its kinda sad its gonna end soon can you make the story go on forever? you could make the never ending NaruSasu story :)
Its amazing that you update 2 times a week a lot of writters dont even update that much a month!So if you have to update only once a week im sure people wont mind to much:)
Thanks for writting such an amazing story Its kinda sad its gonna end soon can you make the story go on forever? you could make the never ending NaruSasu story :)
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naruto would make a good "mother" Bwhahahah!
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heart rendering.
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, thax for updating I really enjoyed reading the newly updated chappie. This story just keep getting better and better I bet the climax is comming in the upcoming chappies.
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love you. i do. marry me. wait, you're taken.
i so wanted naruto to take in the boy, and you wrote it. thank you. that made my day. and he really likes sasuke, i know, so it's only a matter of time before sasuke likes him back, and then they can be like a real family. my god! i'm so happy.
and if you need to cut down on updates, do so. i'll wait as long as i have to for this story. regardless, i look forward to the next chapter.
i so wanted naruto to take in the boy, and you wrote it. thank you. that made my day. and he really likes sasuke, i know, so it's only a matter of time before sasuke likes him back, and then they can be like a real family. my god! i'm so happy.
and if you need to cut down on updates, do so. i'll wait as long as i have to for this story. regardless, i look forward to the next chapter.
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WAAHHHHH! So sweet! I fell in love with Naruto all over again in this chapter. I love that he punched that guard out! Heehee! Served him right! Hiroki is so cute and I'm really curious about his powers.
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey i liked this chapter.. poor poor baby hiroki!! i hope naruto cares for him. i'd love to see a sasuke hiroki moment tho...just to bring out sasuke's kind sweet side if he has one!! so update soon and don't brring it down to once a week i'm not sure i could live!!