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i loved this chapter! daddy sasuke and mommy naruto! XD its so cute XD
also, we're in need of more smut!

Oh wow, there is A Lot happening at once. It's a little bit confusing. I had to reread the last couple of chapters again. >_<
Am I the only one who doubt, that Naruto can and will become Hokage?! I for one, think Shikamaru could become a better one. Asuma said so too. ^^ Will we see Shikamaru in this story? Hope so... :-)
I don't really know if your'e hinting towards SaiHina. Personally I enjoy hoping Sai will continue to 'lust' after Naruto. But I'm glad he gained a new friend. ^^
I jope you will never stop writing. We simply love your story too much! XD

~KaraQ

Oohh! :sniff: they took the baby XD. :Glomps Zrina, and huggles her til she beats me off with a stick: :D. I'm really happy that you like the pic too, but you know, Sasuke all tied up at Naruto's mercy - I just couldn't resist XD. This was a really good chapter, I was worried for a second that they would all have to be dragged back to Konoha :S. I'm glad they didn't. Ren was an excellent choice for leader, and after all the recent decisions and orders things are moving along on a fast clip. I saw you said 60-ish chapters, that leaves about 10, that's about 5 weeks if all goes well... That's so sad ;_;. It'll be a really major accomplishment though, one that you can definitely be proud of. This is an Excellent piece of work. Naruto was so cute at the end there, getting all riled up about the baby, who I have to stop calling the baby, cause he's ... how old is he? In my head he's like 5. I'll go back and check. I also love how Sasuke immediately translated "I'll take him" to 'What are we going to do with a child?' XD. He always was a smart cookie wasn't he ;D. I expected him to give Naruto hell about the mommy comment, but I guess the situation was too tense. He's such a bastard though :D, “Good luck explaining the mission to him, dobe.” They all need hugs right about now. They make a cute little monster family. Hinata was the first person to jump into my mind too when the issue of leaving him came up. So a new mission - rescue Katsuro (isn't that the leader's name from the Rurouni Kenshin OVAs? That's how your character is in my head anyway - kind and respectable like that Katsuro.) This plot is really good, if Naruto ever goes into filler again they should let you write you the plot, that would be Awesome! Much luv, Allys.

AWW! They're gonna take him in! That's such a great idea. I really hope that Sasuke warms up to him.

Loved the chapter, awesome job. I hope you're able to get more writing done. Don't stress yourself too much though, okay?

Aww man Hiroki - :s that's really really sad and the way they kept calling him 'it' made me so mad!!! I'm glad Naruto punched that guy in the face - heh, if Sasuke hadn't been there he probably would've done worse but hey the punch satisfied me ^_^. And I just love how Sai is with Shino, lol, he just seems to rub the other the wrong way lol, makes me laugh despite the intense situations the group is in. Anyway, cool chp. ^_6

Hina xXxx

Wow...This part in the story is really sad...Got my eyes all teary eyed...This story is above and beyond anything I had expected just...No words to describe such gifted writing ability...I patiently await the next chapter...(Bows low to the ground and stays there).

YAY for Hiroki!!! XD I must say that this has been my favorite fanfic for a very long time, and it still hasn't changed!! You have so many elements in this story that make it truly awesome! I seriously don't know how you do any of it!! ^_^ I am so excited for you next update, and if it really comes to an update a week, that's okay! Why should we demand you of something when you can do whatever you want with this regardless of what we want? lol What I'm trying to say is that we should be glad you'll even ipdate at all! ^_^ Good luck time and stuff!

I absolutely love that Naruto took the boy in. It was so sad and heart-warming when he cried out mommy. Totally a hallmark moment. I feel bad that Sasuke is acting the way he is, but if he didn't then he wouldn't be Sasuke. I really look forward to where this little family goes from here!

Hey there! I KNEW IT!!!! Ever since he was first mentioned, I knew Naruto would take Hiroki in.
I'm sorry that I never reviewed before, but I really LOVE this fic. Before I never had the time to leave you a comment, but today is the day^^ I hope my english in not to bad, 'm not very good at writing. Though reading the fictions here help a great deal^^
I'm looking forward every chapter and can not concentrate until I'm done with reading. I'm totaly addicted^^
I hope this story will never end. Though, sometime every story must end, but anyway, I hope it's not anytime soon. By the way, is Hiroki a Jinchuriki like Naruto? Or is he just a testresult of Oro's sickness? I'm really courious. Will Hiroki become an essential part of the story between Sasu and Naru? Argh! I really want to know now, but I know I should wait... grrrrrrr. Anyway. I really could no wait for the next chapter and hope so much, I find again the ime for a comment...
So my last comment: Make your way! You rock! Awesomeness! Till the next time^^

Aww, the poor kid. But now Naruto will take care of him. ^^ I think I want to marry your story. Just as a side note.