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how sad. i'm glad naruto punch that stupid guy out. isn't it sad how people never look underneath the surface maybe if they did we would have less tragedy like columbine and Virginia tech.

Awww, that chap made my eyes get watery at the end. So sweet. Sasuke's response was also rather sad too. i can imagine the scene might've dredged up memories of his own mother. Very sentimental. I wonder how they'll make due now. Great chap.

I am so happy you are not making this a Mpreg,that would so not fit with this story. But in a way it is like one because they are now going to be taking care of a child. It is so sweet to see Naruto as a mother for him. I would also like to see Sasuke as somewhat of a mother to him out with out going OOC.

Keep it up!

Another awesome chapter. I especially loved the scene at the end between Naruto and Hiroki. It was so gorgeous.

Awww! That was so sad but also sweet! That little boy really needs Naruto because only Naruto understands how he feels and is also willing to help him. I'm glad Naruto decided to adopt him. Yep, Hinata can help watch him too. She's a caring person. Great chapter!! :)

Gah, I don't know why it took me so long to review! >< I've been following this story since the begining, and I have to say that is the best Naru/sasu/naru story ever. Your style is very clean, with the right amount of details to make it interesting but not overly descriptive. The caracterization is spot on, specially Sasuke, which is the hardest to make IC. But you did well in showing the two sides of him, the one he shows everyone and the one he tries to deny. Plus, I like how he's slowly accepting his feelings. Naruto's perfect, kudos for not making him just a stupid, loud idiot nor a super!emo kid (and neither Sasuke). The plot is awesome (and according the recent chapters of the manga, something very Naruto-ish... When I read the Sasuke-Orochimaru thing I was like, wait a minute, where I've read something like that!)Now, the lemons are amaizing, but you actually manage to make the story so interesting that I'm not only reading for them, but to know what happens! (That alone shows how skill you are, in my book XP)And one of the things that captured me was how well you insert the story in canon, and didn't forget about it (Asuma's death, for example)
Now, for the best parts (IMHO)... The first time Sasuke shows how much he cares for Naruto, when he found out Orochimaru had taken over him. It was heartbreaking. Then there're the little rutines between Naruto and Sasuke, squee worthy. The first lemon was the best so far, firts, it was Narusasu, and then we had in denial!sub!Sasuke (c'mon Sasuke, embrace your ukeness! XP I'm still waiting for the sub!Sasuke one ... but I think he's still has some issues to sort, beforehe feels confortably with that) Sasuke's first bj was the hotness!!(Naruto thought that too, ne? XP) I like Sai's participation in the story too, even if I didn't liike him at first. And last (well, ther are a thousand more, I might as well qoute the full story) because I'm a kakairu fan, and moreso an Iruka fan, I looooved his part in the last chapter!! *That's* how he is, a chunnin that speaks his mind in front of his superiors, with total disregard of rank, unafraid of the jounin's upper level in skill, and with a terrible temper XDD The hit in Kakashi's balls was the best!! Still a chunin, but caught him unaware... AND he fought dirty. (Go Iruka-sensei) Now I want to read something kakairu from you, s'not fair ::pouts::
OK, sorry for the long review with nothing near close as constructive criticism, and for the crappy english (not my first language)
Can't wait to tomorrow's chapter!! XD

God this story just gets better and better. I love the Kakashi/Iruka interaction -- really true to character. And the bit at the end was awesome! Can't wait for more!

I absolutely LOVE Iruka in this fic! *hugs you to death* Finally someone who doesn't write him as a quiet, blushing uberuke but the tempermental, very vocal, conserned schoolteacher that he is!

Dun dun dunnnnnnn...! Here comes the Akatsuki!! XD I liked the idea of the snake venom turning them onto eachother, well not the fact of them getting hurt but it was cool anyway, it was unexpected. Oh and, YAY!! Dun dun dunnnnnnn....!!! Itachi...teehee......I can sooo see the drama on the way. (That was the point, though, huh?) lol I wonder who you're gonna make leader of the Akatsuki...? lol Exciting.

<.<.....>.>.... Wow... this was a very... interesting chapter... -rubs paws gleefully- i cant wait to see what happens, especially with the little boy!!! Also, i always thought that sai and hina would be a cute odd couple. dunno, sai's openness would probably cause hinata to die from blood loss because of all her blushing or something. he'd be the one in my mind to make a perverted remark about her eyes or something... anyway, nice chapter!
-direwolflilith