rate_review Reviews

*huggles*

I've been on holidays, and now i'm back to the good stuff... which means your story.

Yay for your story and all the goodness it entails. can't wait to see how it progresses.

Your ever faithfull reader,
Kimra

i have not read any of your chapters for a while and when i do they are just amazing. i now don't know if i should anxiously await til saturday or wait that's how good they were i am stuck in the land of indecision. also kudos for the way you had iruka tell off kakashi and knock his dick strings loose (i almost died laughing). thanks for the entertainment.

I'm so giddy. Iruka kicks ass!!!!!! And although I'm am a bit of a Kakashi/Iruka shipper, your scene with these two interacting, made my day. I'm glad we saw Sakura again tooo ^^
Great work

~KaraQ

GYAAAA! This is the best chapter! I love it so much! I'm so giddy and excited now! Iruka and Kakashi's argument was really struck close to home, I think. It was both funny and nerve wracking. Heehee, poor poor Kakashi. ^_^ Maybe a little KakaIru shipping? Our little boy is in trouble now too, they think he was the assassin! GAH! And the Akatsuki leader is sending Itachi to the scene?! GAAAAAAH! So excited! And as usual, your battles are top notch. My heart skipped a beat when I realized Sasuke and Naruto were fighting each other. I'm glad nothing too determental happened. Though if they don't get batter soon Shino's going to send them back to Konoha, DUH DUH DUH! I hope Sakura can get out there and see some action too before the end of the story too. I love how you make use of Oorochimaru's experiments and freaky research in this story. There's just so much to compliment, I really don't have any critiques. Though I feel a little bad for Lee. *sniff* That's it! I proclaim this THE best Naruto fanfic to ever grace the interenet! End of story!

Oh yeah, and Iruka is a quite the little spit-fire I might add. I can't believe he kicked kakashi right in the balls! XD It's so hilareous and it still feels in-character for him. And Kakashi's comment about examining the texture of wall had be choaking on my drink. lol I just wanted to ramble some more, don't mind me. *eagerly awaits next chapter*

I so admire you ability to write action scenes. I simply cannot do it.

Anyway I loved this chapter just like I love all the others. Go Iruka, you show that Kakashi who wears the pants!! LOL That was great I loved the confrontation between those two!

I admire your ability to write fight/action scenes. I just can't do it.

Anyway, I loved this chapter as I do all the other chapters. I would have to say my favorite was the fight between halucination induced Naruto and Sasuke and the confrontation between Iruka and Kakashi! That was awesome. Go Iruka!!! LOL Makes me want to hug him. But I still love Kakashi...he had that coming though! LOL

any chance you could make this mpreg. in the latter chapter of course. mpreg will not just make it happier but more complicated, w/c will be fun.

i just think their relationship will become stagnant w/o it. they'll just have each other when it all ends.

It seems to me that Shino is going to take advantage of the situation