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I absolutely LOVED this chapter! Iruka's explosion was long in coming, I think. While I felt kinda bad for Kakashi, I understood where Iruka was coming from. Everything's coming together nicely and I can't wait to see what new surprises you have in store! Keep up the excellent work! Reading your story inspires me to continue working on my own fiction.

I have just started reading all the chapters of your story since friday and am now finished. I love it! I couldn't wait for your next update! But it was worth the wait. This chapter was real good. All the suspense is killing me. I can't wait untill your saturday update. Waiting three days in between will be torture but I know it will be well worth it. Thank you for your genius and well written story! Ja.

Kismet

oh wow! loved it. seriously did. especially iruka going off on kakashi. i mean, i love kakashi, but he so needed to hear that. and what's with sakura? does she still love sasuke? b/c she's in for a world of hurt when she finds out that he's unavailable. ooooo, and it seems sasuke will get to face itachi sooner than he thought. this is getting so interesting! i can't wait for the next chapter!

Nice progression. I love how Iruka chewed out Kakashi. That was beyond brilliant and absolutly true. Finally Akastsuki's getting involved. I wonder how you're going to handle Itachi. He seems the kind of character that fangirls and boys either love or hate. I fear I am the former, but then I enjoy going down the 'What If' paths. I like how you had the genjutsu make the team fight each other, go delaying tactic.
You mentioned SHIKAMARU (Inner Fangirl starts to jump around sqealing) Sakura turned down poor Lee, and Naruto and Sasuke are hooked up with each other. Is Sakura going to go with the other genius, or is there enough romance with NaruSasuNaru? Eh, whatever, the story is excellent and what ever you do from here on is golden with me. See ya next chapter and thanks for the update. Ja ne
A.S.

OOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHH.....evil cliffy!!!!!!! i love it! i hope the story ends happliy!

“No, thank you, Tsunade-hime. I’ve found some rather interesting textures on your wall and will just stand here and observe them a little bit longer if that is alright with you.”

^^that is certainly my fav line form the chap LOL. Once again you do no fail to entertain here. I was wondering when we'd hear from the remainder of Team 7 and YAY we got to see Iruka! Poor Naruto and Sasuke though. I hope they'll be alright. Nice job.

ahhh! they were fighting each other huh? just like that episode with superman and wonderwomen?

Go Iruka! He really put Kakashi in his place, but I still feel sorry for the jounin. Iruka really got him, though. *snicker*

It was cool what Sasuke did so that Naruto wouldn't attack him when the blond thought he was a monster.

Great chapte, I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon!

Hmmn, Well things are definitely in motion - Sound is in shambles, Akatsuki has made an appearance, and the Hokage has been alerted to the situation. I see Shino tactfully left out any comments on the nature of the boys relationship. Are they going home? This is getting so involved, it's so very cool.

I seriously enjoyed the hints at kakaIru XD :snickers: LOL - Yeah Kakashi the wall was real interesting XD. I also agree with your reasoning as to Sakura and Lee's break up, he really is not her type, no matter how much I personally love him. I was real mad at her for even thinking of talking to Shika though. I mean I know he's trustworthy and brilliant, but Tsunade said not 10 minutes before that No-one was supposed to know :S. The sad thing about that, is that perfectly in character for her, to at least think about it. I'm sorry, but I agree with Sasuke, Sakura means well, but she's really annoying.

I also feel really bad for the chibi, and I hope that he'll be okay.

The fight scene was really good, I loved the twist that they were fighting each other - Does this mean you actually watched the filler XD? LOL, I just skimmed through most of it, but there was that episode when Gai was made to fight Lee. It's an awesome idea and it was really done on your part cause I didn't get until about 3 seconds before Sasuke did. That was so adorable, LOL, I can totally imagine what Sasuke said when he had his head on Naruto's knee. Something along the lines of "Usuratonkachi." XD

Oh man hat doesn't bode well does it? Then Itachi ans Kisame are being sent it - complicates matters a lot. *sigh* I have to say though my favourite part was the kakashi and iruka argument! I LOVED IT!!! Lol really I did and then when Iruka kneed kaka i was like whoa O_O go Iruka-sensei - don't get me wrong I love Kakashi, *smirks* but that was just very well done and i think he did have it coming lol... but is it just my hentai mind or was there a big extra dosage of tension there?

Great update!!!

Hina xXxx