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by Zrina

schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lool Kiba had to listen to them all night *snicker* I thought Sai made a good point to Hinata about maybe her not loving Naruto enough. But then I guess people are different. The cacricature of Sasuke had me laughing hard loool :D especially when even Shino found it funny lol :D It was good. And poor Sai - he's feeling confused :s is he jealous? Now it's got me wondering too. It was a great chapter :)

Hina xXxx
person littleolmee
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter. Hinata is such a sweet character, had to feel a little bad for her; what a way to find out someone you have a crush on is with another. Hmm, is Sai and Hinata heading towards being a couple? Poor Sai, he misses Naruto . . . jealousy is such a hard thing to deal with. Can't wait to see what you got in mind next, take care.
person animehead
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh...a jelous Sai you say?! LOL

Another great chapter. the talk between Hinata and Sai was excellent. I always want to squeal when I read your work. Throwing all of them together like this is wonderful. It just makes for so much fun and a lot of other stuff. I swear whenever I read your new chapters it makes me want to go and write...but I'm lazy.

And thanks to you...I have a totally different Uchiha and a totally different Uzumaki stuck in my head. LOL *sigh* God...the possibilities.
person Bibble
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello

I just wanted to review and tell you that I love your story and that although its not the first one I have read, it is one of my favorites. This along with Spiral Falling by BeccaAmon and NO Such Thing as Heroes By Mirandler43 are my favorite ones that I have read to date. The other two are really good and really well written. This story has been really awesome to read cause its the first really good one I have read that isnt an AU and it is really well done. I think that you are doing a really good job. I also liked Wrong Number it was really good and well written thanks for the good story and though I have only just found The Sound Of Dreams recently I have finished it up to date and considering that i have school homework (which has been ignored a little to do more important stuff Cough*readCough*) and life which has sucked lately and only read like two hours a night for like a week 'cause need to take my time to preserve chapters' but I couldnt help myself so I have officially caught up to the updates on AFF so pls write more and keep them coming thanks. If you havent read those other two stories and like to read I HIGHLY recomend them, they are both long and brilliantly written and both SasuNaruSasu and wow its good smut

ps have you read the latest chapters OMG my Sasu-kun is the greatest and so smexy
person Bibble
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry No Suck Thing as Heroes was written by Rasengan22. My horrible fingers typed Mirandler43 cause i was thinking of The Top Floor which hasnt been updated in a while and is good but I am really bad so sorry for that huge mistype *slaps fingers* "bad dont do that!!!!!!!!!" sorry again
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great chap. Sai having that Sasuke drawing was hilarious to me. And poor Sai, will he ever comprehend rudeness/respect? Lol, though his vulgarity did make me laugh something fierce. Am i sensing a SaixHinata thing or am i going crazy? Anyway, I hope Sai does kinda find something he's looking for. Great job.
person Tiki Rane Gobell
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a wonderful story this is. Very nice. I hope you get some time to write more chapters while your family's around.

TRG
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have to update and soon...MY GODS! That was awesome! Is sai and hinata going to get together?? Mmm...makes me wonder what will happen! PLEASE update when you can! I'd so love you forever! Ttul! KEEP ON ROCKING!
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww poor Sai needs someone to love him!! Too bad Gaara isn't around!! I loved how jealous Naruto got when Sai was coming on to Sasuke. I also loved when Sasuke kissed Naruto, after breakfast, right in front of the others. I'm glad that little boy, Hiroki is back and that he's still alive! I want Sasuke and Naruto to adopt him!!! :)
person RoseHime
schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Complications! Hanzaki has been assassinated! So who's the next in line to be Otokage? Sasame maybe? That would be awesome. And Sai just can't stop causing waves, can he? But if he didn't I guess he wouldn't be Sai would he? lol The part with Sai's drawing of Sasuke really cracked me up! And Hiroki is adorable! Naruto's always been good with kids. I wonder what his powers are like and if he can fully control them. Hmm. I wonder if this is the start of a Sai Hinata romance or if Sai was just being his clueless self. Personally I perfer Kiba with Hinata, but it doesn't particuarly matter to me so long as it's written well (which I'm sure you'll do ^_^). This chapter had a little bit of everything in it. I really love it!