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April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read both 46 and 47 and I must say that I loved them!!!!! 46 was just plain great! I heart Sai! lol
I must ask that you forgive me because my reviews are really uninformative. It's because of my inner fan girl! :)
I must ask that you forgive me because my reviews are really uninformative. It's because of my inner fan girl! :)
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April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD Where to begin.. Um, at the beginning - Luffles XD Have you seen Happy Feet yet? I swear that's where it came from LOL, Luffle up Sadistickiss' feathers for me - I really do love that word - it sounds positively rude to me XD. Oh and I always thought snogging was just kissing, but that's with the Brits and words evolve and change all the time, hey 'Luffles' XD.
Okay now for an actual review - Your little devotional to Hinata was really sweet, I like that you did that. Hinata is such a love and she hardly gets any. Oh and SaiHina :Glomps and sneak in a luffle XD: I love the way he brought it up LOL, he's so freaking blunt, that's exactly what they need, both of them, they're adorable together. Oh and the comment on Naruto and 110% of his heart :) Well if that isn't an absolute truth, nothing is. How I adore that boy, he really is walking sunshine, and the way you capture him XD How did you get the sunlight to stay the bottle? How do you make evey one of your chapters so very magical? Oh, I'm really emotional today O.o Moving along - I like that after last night, despite all the squeamishness, everyone's lightened up towards Sasuke. It's like, oh look he is human :) That was certainly an excellent way to break down walls, you really do amaze me. Everything is so purposeful, it's like A Level literature all over again XD.
Then Holy crap - major happenings Hanzaki and the Scary ass Kawaii chibi! :blink blink: Whoa - I have no idea what the hell is going on, but I love it. I find myself with absolute faith in your mastery and will follow you wherever it is you want to go with this. When do the Tonfa awards roll back around? You should so win one. And hehehe :grins evilly: you did say Sai would mess with Sasuke XD. Your sense of humour and its timing is impeccable. That is one of my favourite things about this story. If I've told you this before (and I probably have) Too Bad!! Take it like a woman XD. (sorry O.o that there was a by product of the fact that compliments make me feel uneasy). But "Had anyone doubted that Sasuke actually had a soft spot for Naruto it was laid to rest as he actually hesitated before slicing his katana through the drawing several times until it fell like confetti.
He paused once more as Naruto gave him the largest, hurt blue eyes that he had ever seen."
Comic mastery, and so sweet and warm at the same time XD. It's a gift. And Holy Crap Sai hitting on Sasuke, priceless XD. And two seconds later, you spin right back into Kishimotoness. With Sai and his questioning of his emotions, it's like, I can't explain this right, but you take the characters, make them do out of the way things and yet make it utterly believable by keeping them so firmly in character and making nods at Kishimoto, and the actual story line - which somehow you beat him to the punch - Are you sure you don't have spies in Shonen jump? or that direct line - It's like if I were Catholic and Kishimoto were God - You would be the Pope. I'm not sure that made any sense. But I've had a headache all day, so forgive me, One more quick luffle and I'm off. Hopefully on Tuesday I'll be more coherent. Oh and I hate to say this but maybe you should slow down your updates, to keep them regular, at least for a while. You've done amazing so far and I don't think anyone would really mind. At least not anybody with any kind of sensitivity. Luv U, Ja ne.
Okay now for an actual review - Your little devotional to Hinata was really sweet, I like that you did that. Hinata is such a love and she hardly gets any. Oh and SaiHina :Glomps and sneak in a luffle XD: I love the way he brought it up LOL, he's so freaking blunt, that's exactly what they need, both of them, they're adorable together. Oh and the comment on Naruto and 110% of his heart :) Well if that isn't an absolute truth, nothing is. How I adore that boy, he really is walking sunshine, and the way you capture him XD How did you get the sunlight to stay the bottle? How do you make evey one of your chapters so very magical? Oh, I'm really emotional today O.o Moving along - I like that after last night, despite all the squeamishness, everyone's lightened up towards Sasuke. It's like, oh look he is human :) That was certainly an excellent way to break down walls, you really do amaze me. Everything is so purposeful, it's like A Level literature all over again XD.
Then Holy crap - major happenings Hanzaki and the Scary ass Kawaii chibi! :blink blink: Whoa - I have no idea what the hell is going on, but I love it. I find myself with absolute faith in your mastery and will follow you wherever it is you want to go with this. When do the Tonfa awards roll back around? You should so win one. And hehehe :grins evilly: you did say Sai would mess with Sasuke XD. Your sense of humour and its timing is impeccable. That is one of my favourite things about this story. If I've told you this before (and I probably have) Too Bad!! Take it like a woman XD. (sorry O.o that there was a by product of the fact that compliments make me feel uneasy). But "Had anyone doubted that Sasuke actually had a soft spot for Naruto it was laid to rest as he actually hesitated before slicing his katana through the drawing several times until it fell like confetti.
He paused once more as Naruto gave him the largest, hurt blue eyes that he had ever seen."
Comic mastery, and so sweet and warm at the same time XD. It's a gift. And Holy Crap Sai hitting on Sasuke, priceless XD. And two seconds later, you spin right back into Kishimotoness. With Sai and his questioning of his emotions, it's like, I can't explain this right, but you take the characters, make them do out of the way things and yet make it utterly believable by keeping them so firmly in character and making nods at Kishimoto, and the actual story line - which somehow you beat him to the punch - Are you sure you don't have spies in Shonen jump? or that direct line - It's like if I were Catholic and Kishimoto were God - You would be the Pope. I'm not sure that made any sense. But I've had a headache all day, so forgive me, One more quick luffle and I'm off. Hopefully on Tuesday I'll be more coherent. Oh and I hate to say this but maybe you should slow down your updates, to keep them regular, at least for a while. You've done amazing so far and I don't think anyone would really mind. At least not anybody with any kind of sensitivity. Luv U, Ja ne.
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Have I mentioned recently that I love you? And I love this chapter. These sweet relationship/bonding chapters are what I live for. Not that I'd want them constantly, my teeth would rot out do to the excessive cutesy sweetness, but still, I love them and it's a nice follow for the previous chapter, the one which I seem to have neglected to review... opps. Anyway, nice chapters, both of them, and I can't wait for the next one. Thanks for posting! Ja ne
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHAHAHA! That ending was brilliant! And the beginning! The beginning was brilliant! I loved the bit wear Naruto's pulling Sasuke along by his collar -- very sexy. ;) Can't wait for the next installment!
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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely wonderful and has definitely made it to the top of my favourite canon-ish Naruto stories list! I've read all of what's up so far over the last 3 days (probably spent more hours on it then I should have) and am now pouting on the prospect of waiting for updates. I think what I love best about it (other than that Naruto and Sasuke are together like they should be :D ) is that all of the characters feel so in character to me. I can really picture them all doing what's happened here. Aside from Naruto and Sasuke, I can especially see Sai making the comments you've had him make. I don't know why people tend to dislike him, he makes me giggle.
I only had one minor critique, and it's a very very minor one, but I was reminded by a comment in this chapter. My fiancée is British, making me quite familiar with British slang, and Sai's use of "Snog" is incorrect from any source I've ever encountered previously. I believe the term you were looking for was "Shag" which refers to sex instead of "Snog" which refers to intense kissing. Feel free to correct me if I'm wrong.
For now I'll just have to content myself with the knowledge that you update regularly and tomorrow's one of those days. And I fully intend on pointing my fiancée this way when she's finished catching up on the manga. My housemate and I recently sucked her down into our Naruto obsessive abyss ;) it's a lovely place!
I only had one minor critique, and it's a very very minor one, but I was reminded by a comment in this chapter. My fiancée is British, making me quite familiar with British slang, and Sai's use of "Snog" is incorrect from any source I've ever encountered previously. I believe the term you were looking for was "Shag" which refers to sex instead of "Snog" which refers to intense kissing. Feel free to correct me if I'm wrong.
For now I'll just have to content myself with the knowledge that you update regularly and tomorrow's one of those days. And I fully intend on pointing my fiancée this way when she's finished catching up on the manga. My housemate and I recently sucked her down into our Naruto obsessive abyss ;) it's a lovely place!
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the sex in sexy. 8D
I could go on and on about all the perfect you have taken care and time to slam into this story, but I'm afraid I'll bore. So yeah, perfect! Great! CONTINUE!
I could go on and on about all the perfect you have taken care and time to slam into this story, but I'm afraid I'll bore. So yeah, perfect! Great! CONTINUE!
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol!!! poor kiba!! he's always doing this, i feel so sorry for him!! but that was yummy....easpecially the Whams....i just cracked up so hard!! great chapter as usual can't wait for the next one. when is naruto going to actually say i love you to sasuke when he's away, instead of just 'me toos'? just asking!! ja ne
Taka
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April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I guess your not Kishimoto, but it was fun to entertain the idea for a few seconds. Besides, where would be the fun if you thought the same as he did? Anyway. Loved the chapter, thanks for the condolences on headaches. I suffer migrains as well, so most the time I get to a point where if I don't just do something (like read awesome stories) while I got a headache I may never actually get to read those stories. But yeah.
Anyway. This chapter was fun. Enjoyed it immesely. I probably would have gone for 'thump' instead of 'wham' but since it was a metalic sound I supose 'thump' wouldn't have quite worked. Not sure. Wham seemed to detract from it though, I'm not even sure why. Not that I'm criticising, not in a serious way anyway. Just sharing my awesome knowledge and... being annoying.
Anyway. I'm finding time to read your story even though I'm currently 300km from home without my internet and doing a 9-5 university class that saps my brain away and leaves me with nothing but mush. If that doesn't tell you how much I enjoy this story then I don't think i'll ever be able to impart how good it is to you. :D
The end of my review. Best of luck with the rest of it... however long it takes.
Kimra
Anyway. This chapter was fun. Enjoyed it immesely. I probably would have gone for 'thump' instead of 'wham' but since it was a metalic sound I supose 'thump' wouldn't have quite worked. Not sure. Wham seemed to detract from it though, I'm not even sure why. Not that I'm criticising, not in a serious way anyway. Just sharing my awesome knowledge and... being annoying.
Anyway. I'm finding time to read your story even though I'm currently 300km from home without my internet and doing a 9-5 university class that saps my brain away and leaves me with nothing but mush. If that doesn't tell you how much I enjoy this story then I don't think i'll ever be able to impart how good it is to you. :D
The end of my review. Best of luck with the rest of it... however long it takes.
Kimra
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April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lmao! poor kiba xD
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April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Spoilers...gah! I know you mentioned them but spoilers are just like an accident. You just got to LOOK! O well. I love the ending to this chapter. It was so funny! Kiba soooo needs to get laid. I love a teary-eyed sasuke to. I like how they are getting more comfortable with there relationship. Oh, I saw your comment about migrane's. I had them and I turned vegan. Hadn't had one since. If I do get a headache, that is all I get..a regular headache! Not the head is about to explode, I'm about to pass out, I just threw-up and out for 2 days straight headache. OK, back on topic. Does Sasuke shave his legs? Just kidding. Can't wait for Saturday!