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for The Sound of Dreams

by Zrina

schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that ending was hilarious! gave me a good giggle. and i don't know why, but sasame still gets on my nerves. ah, well. great chapter. i really loved the beginning, what with that in depth look at sasuke's feelings about their relationship and what he did 'last night.' excellent. can't wait for the next chapter.

(ps. tell your husband that sasuke is life! *wink*)
person Allys
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O ZOMG!!! ROFL.M.A.O :sigh: breathe breathe :snort: ROFLMAO Oh My GoD!! Lady, you're killing me, That was Hilarious XD! :clears throat: Okay - Aaawwww!!! I see you've got to the WAFF, so sweet, a really beautiful transition. Overall, this was an adorable chapter, a perfect foil to all the intensity of the last one. God, you really have a gift for this. You're amazingly in tune with people's emotions, and how to guide them to exactly where you want them to be. Your poor husband, he loses arguments All the Time doesn't he, LOL. You must have kicked ass at debate XD. Oh and I'm stealing your word - Luffles, Allys.
p.s. - I've been wondering about Kakashi and the mangekyou too. I mean if it was seeing Obito die shouldn't it have come up before now? Did he always have it and was just hiding it? It is really the same thing? it looks like it has an extra circle to me, but maybe I'm just mixing up the anime and manga versions. Anyway, that's a long and unanswerable tangent so...
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMAO that was so good I loved it...you rock!!!!^_^
person MsTrick
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was intense. The music metaphor was really beautiful--I liked it. Not to mention your ending just about knocked me out. And you're making me really hate Orochimaru. -_-
person mydarkerside
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The return of the incredibly cute albino fox with the big blue eyes!! Oh joy! I really love that henge and you're description of it. Orochi is as worrisome as ever, the jerk. Will Sasuke realize that the reason the curse seal went into corrupt mode was b/c Orochi's slipping out of his cage? On that note, I love how you suggest that the curse seal greatly affects Sasuke's personality and decisions. I can live with that kind of interpretation (for the manga and anime) very easily XD.

And have I mentioned that I love your Sai? Really just adore it. And Kiba and Hinata and Shino as well. I don't know why, but all of a sudden, a couple chapters ago I couldn't stop wondering "What IS Sakura doing?" I hope you're not going to forget all about her? Well, I love this fic still and the regular updates are beyond admirable. (I don't even *review* regularly...*sweatdrops*). Keep writing. I'm excited to see this fic to the end.
person Lauryl
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That instrument thing was really creative, and even went with the title of the story. I liked it a lot. =)
person Kerrisa
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you. I really do. I love this fic. Plain and simple. I think imma love you both forever. <3
person Kimmy
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh god, but i do love your writing. and yeah i went all 'ahhhhh' at the end of ch 45, it really was just... ahhhh. all in all this was one hell of a ch and i can't wait for the updates
person Beachan18
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally. The smut has arrived.

So hot.

And omg I reaaaally hope Sasuke didn't hear those 3 little words, because knowing him, he would probably try to 'BREAK ALL TIES. AGAIN'

But I can't help but hope sasuke also says those 3 little words in the near future.

Orochimaru u bastard~! Go back and be Kyuubi's bitch, u hoe! >_<

I'm really hoping for a happy ending to this masterpiece. =^-^=
person MeLaiya
schedule April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE THIS SO MUCH. the passion, the intrigue, the suspense!!! This is one of THE VERY BEST written fics I have ever read. U are an incredibly talented author and I really think you should consider goin professional. Anyhoo, keep up the good work and update soon.