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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo! That was a hawt chapter there. Powerful stuff. And awwwwww did Naruto just say what i think he said??? Anywayz, i hope Sasuke will embrace that gift. Damn Orochimaru. He just had lurk around. Anywayz. I love this chap alot. Can't wait for the next one!
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HI,
I just found you fanfic today, well since it's 3:30 am I would have to say I found it yesterday :D
I love it!!!!!!!!!! (If my English is not at its best right now: It IS 3:30 AM...)
At the beginning I was wondering if I could read a fanfic with over 40 chapters but it went surprisingly well :D
You described the charas and their actions so well and keep as close to the storyline as possible- that's really great (and i haven't found that very often as of yet- not that close to the storyline and you didn't completely abandon it after you changed your story from the original!).
Though I found the first twenty chapters or so very interesting I was really surprised when you included Sasame and I realized that the action is only starting. I am so looking forward to what is going to happen- if they are going to go back to Konoha or if they are going to make otogakure their new home. I am just glad that you wrote at one point that you have the story already outlined and that you are really planning on finishing this fanfic. it would be tooo bad otherwise... (That description is too mild!)
The way you describe the charas- you make them sound so droolworthy..:D I LOVE how you portray Sai though I don't quite get your Shino- he sounds somewhat off to me. I know he is the serious type who sticks to rules but I still don't think he would just want to take Naruto back?? I don't know- perhaps your other charas have influenced me too much :) I have been reading none-stop...
I like how your sex scenes are always so different from each other and how they (most of them?) seem to have a kind of meaning? behind them. Ok I don't know how to say that. I hope ypu understand anyway.
Do you really think Naruto is such a bleeding heart that he needs to convince himself first the the others are enemies before he can kill them and not just expects them to be enemies before they start growing on him and falters in killing them then? Hm, I don't see him as a heartless killer of course but a bleeding heart makes him sound (you proved otherwise though he did get a kunai in the stomach) like a not-so-efficient shinobi and that doesn't feel right either!? That's not criticism just a curious question. is there a middle ground? I mean that's what Naruto's nindo (or what's it called :D ) about: finding a way between a heartless tool and a useless bleeding heart, right? I should probably visit a community with that, ne? :)
Thanks for reading my ramblings and BIG THANKS for sharing this story (and putting it where I could find it!)
I saved the link to this story in my favorites so PLEASE keep updating! I am soo looking forward to the next 20 chapters.
[though with the story you have going my estimate is at 70+ at least, I mean: Orochimaru, Itachi, Akatsuki (? or is that = Itachi's death?), restoring Otogakure, restoring Sasuke's health/sanity/soul whatever, getting a happy end for their relationship, a happy end with their friends no matter where they end up (how could they convince the council so that it's convincing to us readers?) and the obligatory smut scenes :D
Souhds like a lot of work, chapters, story, fun!!!!!!!!!!!!!}
Yours
-xyz-
I just found you fanfic today, well since it's 3:30 am I would have to say I found it yesterday :D
I love it!!!!!!!!!! (If my English is not at its best right now: It IS 3:30 AM...)
At the beginning I was wondering if I could read a fanfic with over 40 chapters but it went surprisingly well :D
You described the charas and their actions so well and keep as close to the storyline as possible- that's really great (and i haven't found that very often as of yet- not that close to the storyline and you didn't completely abandon it after you changed your story from the original!).
Though I found the first twenty chapters or so very interesting I was really surprised when you included Sasame and I realized that the action is only starting. I am so looking forward to what is going to happen- if they are going to go back to Konoha or if they are going to make otogakure their new home. I am just glad that you wrote at one point that you have the story already outlined and that you are really planning on finishing this fanfic. it would be tooo bad otherwise... (That description is too mild!)
The way you describe the charas- you make them sound so droolworthy..:D I LOVE how you portray Sai though I don't quite get your Shino- he sounds somewhat off to me. I know he is the serious type who sticks to rules but I still don't think he would just want to take Naruto back?? I don't know- perhaps your other charas have influenced me too much :) I have been reading none-stop...
I like how your sex scenes are always so different from each other and how they (most of them?) seem to have a kind of meaning? behind them. Ok I don't know how to say that. I hope ypu understand anyway.
Do you really think Naruto is such a bleeding heart that he needs to convince himself first the the others are enemies before he can kill them and not just expects them to be enemies before they start growing on him and falters in killing them then? Hm, I don't see him as a heartless killer of course but a bleeding heart makes him sound (you proved otherwise though he did get a kunai in the stomach) like a not-so-efficient shinobi and that doesn't feel right either!? That's not criticism just a curious question. is there a middle ground? I mean that's what Naruto's nindo (or what's it called :D ) about: finding a way between a heartless tool and a useless bleeding heart, right? I should probably visit a community with that, ne? :)
Thanks for reading my ramblings and BIG THANKS for sharing this story (and putting it where I could find it!)
I saved the link to this story in my favorites so PLEASE keep updating! I am soo looking forward to the next 20 chapters.
[though with the story you have going my estimate is at 70+ at least, I mean: Orochimaru, Itachi, Akatsuki (? or is that = Itachi's death?), restoring Otogakure, restoring Sasuke's health/sanity/soul whatever, getting a happy end for their relationship, a happy end with their friends no matter where they end up (how could they convince the council so that it's convincing to us readers?) and the obligatory smut scenes :D
Souhds like a lot of work, chapters, story, fun!!!!!!!!!!!!!}
Yours
-xyz-
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WAAHHH! Damn you Oorochimaru! DAAAAMMMN YOOOUUU! Sasuke was getting along just fine without your stupid curse biting stupidness! GAH! That chapter was intense. And scary. Evil Sasuke has reared his ugly head. Naruto said he loves him though! Not that I think Sasuke heard him... (sniff) Naruto will save him from the darkness though! I just know it!
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I must say i really LOVE this story,is one of the bests I´ve read of Naruto & Sasuke...Very good written,the plot highly interesting,and the best,they are both In Character.Great fic :)
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April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great job, bvut how will they have sex if kiba and SAI are going to be around all the time?? oh no........yeah i'm over it now. loved your chapter!! update soon!! can't wait to see how it goes. and what do you think of sasuke's new fangirl in the manga?? email me and tell about it and if you have msn messenger we could talk!! ja ne
Taka
Taka
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April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kyaaa omg when was the last chapter i was able to review? i can't remember! i've had to read offline instead so much lately :( *sigh* but anyway, you know i love every chapter anyway. the last chapter, with the attack of the third sound bass was quite awesome. the detail and imagery was great. loved the flicker on/flicker off effect and the descriptions of the fights. sasuke at the end was sorta funny to me after all that action, and he's the worst injured yet obviously the captain in their particulary "squadron" XD
and now THIS chapter, the konoha gang finally catches up to them and we have the big confrontation. i hafta say i was most pleased. i had lots of gushing i wanted to remember to do about specific things but i'm afraid my fatigue has robbed me of most of it. i did love this line: He made a worse face and ran his tongue up against his pallet a few times like a dog that had just licked a skunk's ass.
lol it seems no matter what's going on in a chapter you manage to get at LEAST one line in that makes me crack up. this chapter particularly had a lot of them, most of them not even one liners so much as character interaction. everyone coming together and basically having that mini-reacquainting was just.. cool to me. heh. i get a real kick out of how sasuke reacts/interacts, especially in regards to his protectiveness of naruto (of course, and even when defending naruto from himself :p). but also, of course, sai in the mix is greatness. so now that sai's announced they're to stay with them, i wonder what will happen next??!! i hope i get time to review the next 2 installments before i go into the hospital for my c-section!! otherwise.. well possibly see ya after april 18 lol
*glomps you*
~ lg
and now THIS chapter, the konoha gang finally catches up to them and we have the big confrontation. i hafta say i was most pleased. i had lots of gushing i wanted to remember to do about specific things but i'm afraid my fatigue has robbed me of most of it. i did love this line: He made a worse face and ran his tongue up against his pallet a few times like a dog that had just licked a skunk's ass.
lol it seems no matter what's going on in a chapter you manage to get at LEAST one line in that makes me crack up. this chapter particularly had a lot of them, most of them not even one liners so much as character interaction. everyone coming together and basically having that mini-reacquainting was just.. cool to me. heh. i get a real kick out of how sasuke reacts/interacts, especially in regards to his protectiveness of naruto (of course, and even when defending naruto from himself :p). but also, of course, sai in the mix is greatness. so now that sai's announced they're to stay with them, i wonder what will happen next??!! i hope i get time to review the next 2 installments before i go into the hospital for my c-section!! otherwise.. well possibly see ya after april 18 lol
*glomps you*
~ lg
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April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahahaha! Poor Sasuke is NOT going to be pleased. ^_^ I like how team eight and Sai interact and it will be interesting to see how they get along with Sasuke and Naruto (if those two don't slip away that is). And Shino's right isn't he? About how Sasuke may have to chose between vengence and Naruto's best interest. GAH! I LOOOOOOOOVE this story! It's built up really well and the characters are very in character. It's defenately a believable canon deviation. Keep it up!
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April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know your story just keeps on getting better and better! I LOVE IT! Even without there being so much smut I don't care! I love this story, keeps me wanting to go back and re-read your chapters all over again! Its just that addicting! ^^ Especially the funny stuff...Gods I cannot get over the situation with that scene of Sasuke and Naruto talking about the clones. Or sasuke's reaction to naruto's comment. Pure gold girly. GAH! Love it! Please update as SOON as you CAN! TTUL! LOVE YA!
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chappie! Yay. Though it wasn't necessaril;y a heatfelt reunion of sorts it was well manuevered i think. Very good. And i like Sasuke being proud of his dobe. This story is gonna be real awesome with Team 8 in the mix now. Loved this update. Can't wait ill Saturday.
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's evil! I am not happy about them staying. >.< It's makes me sad.