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for The Sound of Dreams

by Zrina

person Dragon7
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
person Kimra
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm kind of bouncing in my seat in anticipation of smut to come... does that make me bad? Or just peverted? Probably the second... or both. :P Who cares?

Love the story. I love Sai. You have made me love Sai. I honestly didn't think it was possible. I didn't mind him before, he was just some dude in the manga that didn't concern me. But I love him now. Everytime I read him in the manga or anywhere else it will always be with the personality you have expanded on in this piece.

*huggles* for the good thought.

Kimra
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonder how Sasuke going to think about that having Sai with them. Great chapter. Until next time, take care, and god bless.
person littleolmee
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wah . . . what a great chapter Zrina! The Konoha gang has finally arrived. Shino's debeate with Samame was well done, so in character for him. You just got to love Sai, using his inks to watch out for Naruto and then his excuse . . . though Shino didn't buy it; its a good thing for Hinata that he really didn't need to take a leak after all. Sai and Naruto together is always fun to read. If those guys get to stay with them then Sasuke is in for a lot of headaches I do believe. LOL, Sasuke sizing up the competition was a great part too. He sure did move fast to let everyone know the peeking order when it came to Naruto though didn't he? That whole "Do you want details?" was too much . . . Naruto embarrassed, Sai wanting details, Kiba distrubed by the whole thing, and Hinata on the verge of having a break down of some sort it seemed LOL! I think that was my favorite part. The group from Konoha seems to understand Naruto's reasons a bit better now that he has explained what the council had in mind for him. Which is a good thing, the more who actually know Naruto and accept him that realize just what the council has in mind for one of their loyal ninja's the more there will be to stand up against it, hopefully . . . . So . . . will Sasuke and Naruto allow them to stay? Or are they going to try and sneek off and the group tailing them? Though Naruto might enjoy having his old friends around I doubt Sasuke will want to share. If they stay why do I have a feeling there will be lots of Sasuke making out with Naruto in unappropiete places where the others will see? Man, he was on edge over Samame. What will he be doing when he knows of at least two in the group seem to have interest in his blonde and who knows about Shino? LOL, well good entertainment for us readers I'm sure! Anyway thank you for the update, it was a great chapter! I can't wait to see what you have in mind next for this story. Take care.
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This whole chapter was great!! Loved how Sasuke showed everyone that he and Naruto were mates. He's come a long way! I loved Sai throughout and I'm glad that he and the others are going to stay with Naruto instead of trying to force him to go back. They couldn't beat him and Sasuke in a fight anyway. ;)
person Natha
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great!

I was having a bad day (my boss...) but this chapter just makes me smile. I wonder if Kishimoto would be sometimes jealous of this story :-)

Thanks
Nathaniel
person roro237
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It just keeps getting better! Even without the smut. Don't get me wrong I love smut looking forward to more smut:) But the story line is wonderful. I like the opinionated Shino that added a spark for me. Of course can't get enough Sasuke and Naruto and the closeness that they are shareing.
person Allys
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aaaww, I'm so proud of Sasuke!! And Naruto XD - Mark your territory boys =D I'm really happy everyone's together now. Now I suppose on to the real action, cause honestly there's just the one base left and then what?? Hmmn can't wait to see! Sorry I've been taking so long with the pic I promised you but I keep changing my mind about the details though it shouldn't be too much longer again.
person animehead
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I so freaking love penis boy Sai!!! And Sasuke is amazing. Their whole little discussion in the bedroom was awesome. Poor Hinata. All left out. I really can't wait until Saturday. With all of them around I know things are going to get crazy. Ha! Wouldn't it be amazing for Sai to overhear Naruto and Sasuke going at it! LOL A girl can dream can't she!
person Kurai
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD Oh, Sai, you adorable, socially-inept bastard. If you keep driving Shino's blood pressure up like that, he might just explode.