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for For Forever

by DogandPoo

person Nefe D.J.
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha Ha XD, that last part was so funny. keep going I'm liking this story ^-^!
person Anon
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very funny, an irrate Sasuke always amuses me to great levels! Keep up the good work, I'm really looking forward to this continuing!
person dattebayochan
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I like!! Sasuke does have such an obsessive personality to start with, doesn't he? I can see him very clearly becoming obsessed with Naruto in small ways, leading up to him thinking about fox-boy as much as he does his brother. Sasuke has always seemed the type to dislike not getting what he wants, and we already know he goes and gets what he wants. Keep it up! The writing was good and characterization was good. Can't wait to see the next chapters!
person akume
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Muahahaha! Stupid pervert Sasuke. Anyway, thanks for the story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Until then. Ja.