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for Lucid

by Rashaka

person Tsukashi
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Sakura is totally oblivious. I hope she gets a wakeup call at her birthday party.
person Seija
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*claps*
Sounds good thus far.
Write more.
person Lovelesslover
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol, omg that's great I can't wait for the next chapter, lol.
person MufaZu
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. One of the funniest and best I've had the pleasure of reading. Please, for the love of the gods, continue this story. I'm extremely curious as to what happens.
person Kelocena
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's a little late to tell you now, I know but if it's two years ahead of the manga, Sakura would be turning 18. They're 15 after the time skip because they were 12 1/2 when by the time Sasuke left and Naruto was gon for 2 1/2 years... Good fic, though.
person Torrence
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome! Please continue writing, I can't wait to see what happens. Also, where can I find the Crushing Velvet "theme song"? I've been looking for it everywhere!
person Ane S. Thesia
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eek. Your chapters are too short, it's almost like torture. >.< Must... read... more... stop teasing... us...
person Porkchop
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love you Rashaka! The conversation and awkwardness between Kakashi and Sakura reminded me much of the interaction between Zuko and Katara in "Whose Hearts are Mountains". No one, I repeat, NO ONE can write the proverbial mind fuck that occurs psychologically between two people trying to figure one another out as you can. I can never grow tried of reading your work. :) But, I can beg and plead for more, More, MORE! (This chapter did come out faster than normal.. so I'll lay off.) Keep up the great work! -Lori
person jovianwolfgirl
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heheheh, that was great! I bet that was Kakashi kicking the tarsh can. After all, he the one having x-rate dreams of his student. Update soon!
person Jade Sabre
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Look at me, leaving you an actual review! ^_^

*cackles with glee*

*rereads, still cackling*

I LOVE this Sakura. And I LOVE Kakashi coming in and being all awkward and probably caught in his head between staring at her and thinking sick things, and kicking himself for being there at all because WHY should it matter and why should he have to ask because it was just aw fuck. *huggles Kakashi, though he probably protests*

Seriously. This was a wonderful chapter to wake up to. Sakura's energy is infectious, and I enjoyed all of her "it really IS my birthday" comments. And the math thing at the beginning. So random, but so true. And now that I think of it, it really balances her perky!almostblonde!ness with her intellectualness. Nice. And her father's comment. And the desk. And the trash can. And--and--and--

*breathes*

Lovely.