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by Rashaka

person Map
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the funniest little story I've read in a while. Kicking garbage cans, over inane conversations! Priceless! And on top of that, every so often, I get a jolt from the more meaningful plot lines in the story. Nice combination of heart and laughter...
person tovah
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL I love the idea that Kakashi might have tripped/kicked or whatever to the trash can. This is a good story so far and I look forward to your next update!
person mel
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I really like the way this story is progressing. Keep updating.
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Every chapter I continue laughing. Thank god for this fiction. I have had an odd sort of day and this cheered me right up. Just thinking about Kakashi kicking over a trash can in frustration makes me giggle something awful. Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
person Kilrath
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like what i've read so far keep it up
person Porkchop
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful Rashaka. :) I really enjoyed this chapter... Kakashi finally has something 'real' to go on rather than his lil fantasies. The story is progressing well... I am really enjoying it. You're too hard on yourself in your A/N's. o.0
person Kelocena
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't normally read KakaSaku but you've got me interested. It takes skill to do that. Good job.
person Iris
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is such an excellent story! I think you have Kakashi down to an absolute T. It's beyond perfect, and I can't wait for the next chapter, and for some "real life" smut.
person Fangirl
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow.. this is a wonderful story.. I love how you've taken the time to actually think out a story to go along with the thoughts he has. It's really awesome. Keep it up, and honestly, you don't us -ly words too much.
person Jovianwolfgirl
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was. Is Kakashi going to have a other dream about his dear Sakura? And is Sakura ever going to figure out what kakashi thinking? PLease update soon!