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for Lucid

by Rashaka

person Ane S. Thesia
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor, poor Kakashi...

XD /rolls around on the floor/

schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor Kakashi-sensei, his mind playing evil tricks on him. Then there's Sakura who's adorable as always and totally oblivious. So looking forward to the next bit of this. :3
person Kay-san
schedule November 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved the last line! That was priceless! I will definitely keep watch for your updates. This seems like a truly promising beginning. Hugs & Kisses!
person Tsukashi
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, hawt dream sequence! More soon please?
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. I'm totally looking forward to what happens next. XD
person ZQGirl
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* Well. Kakashi's got to actually kiss her - in real life! - before he goes to the Special Hell. *snickers some more*
person akasha
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, ...fuck! (my sentiments exactly!) just when it was about to get very yummy. please update soon... i want more kaka X saku goodness!
person lanier
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahahah, that was great. Poor Kakakshi. Damn that was hot.
person Dionysos
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well that was good! I thought she was really there! but then darn it had to be a dream! ahh up have to updatate soon! yeah really update soon i want to know the rest of the plot.
person Aya
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooooh...interesting. Humerous...maybe a little silly...but very interesting. Oooooh, do continue!