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for Lucid

by Rashaka

person Love_less_lover
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice.
person jennjennr
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hello,

Great story, I loved the paring and I loved the way you set it up. This chapter was great, it really showcases Kakashi's personality. Great job writing him, I really liked your characterization of him, smart pervy and funny as hell. Great job! Thanks so much for writing this, and please update soon.
person Anon
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwww p00r kakashi, it was all a dream! y0u write very well i l00k f0rward t0 reading the rest.
person Inari
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hah. XD That was awesome. <3 Poor Kakashi, blueballed by a dream...teehee.
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The last line was great. I could almost hear him saying it in my mind before I broke down in a fit of laughter...that was a stupendous first chapter and I can't wait for more.