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for Trouble in Paradise

by terranigma11

person Vague
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.

Emi Baptiste
Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing.
person redtatsu
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Where did you go? Did the boat sink? Are there any survivors? PEOPLE WANT TO KNOW! Well, I do at least. Please don't leave this in limbo.
person Sam
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't say I know how you feel, and I hope I never can, but I can say that I understand where your coming from. If I lost my mom...I don't know what I'd do. Just remember, she wouldn't want you to give up on your own life because she's no longer in it. She would want you to keep going and be happy. I read a saying on my grandparents wall once: It's when everythings wrong, and you think thats it, when you must not quit.

I know your thinking I'm just saying this cause I wanna see a story keep going, but the story can rot, as long as you make sure your own continues.

Sincerely,
A concerned fan
person Tara
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh...My...God...*on the brink of breaking down*

I feel empathy for you...I know how it feels like, especially when people apologise to you just because they think it's right or i would be polite, it just comes out, naturally. And sometimes I've even thought of screaming in their faces and gauging their eyes out because when I looked, I didn't find anything there but only pity. The pity just makes you even more aware that what you're mourning for has happened. They couldn't possibly...know.
Unless they've experienced a sense of loss themselves, but nonetheless, I am truly, truly sorry. And I understand your need to take time off and be with yourself, your family. I don't think any of us are in any position to deny you of this right so take as long as you need. I'm going to be honest, I do feel, somewhat, disappointed because you know how much I enjoy reading your stories. But you need this, so don't fret. Heck, I'm still hurting from my loss. No matter what people say, it's wounds like these time cannot heal.

May she rest in peace...
person Taylor A.L.L
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so very sorry for your loss. Y'know, I guess I can relate to you slightly. I just lost my Aunt around my birthday, and needless to say, I was struck dumb, when I heard it, and the information truly sunk into my head when I saw her in her covered in flowers. Y'know, I should rephrase that; you definately havent said goodbye to your Mom, it's just a "See you later", y'know? Your Mom is definately not gone for good,she's just made a transition from a physical form, to a non physical form. So, it's a transition, not death, because she's not dead.

And you, dont do yourself any harm. I know I dont know you, and you dont know me, but I want you to know that I love you. Those words may ring hollow in your ears, but, believe me, they mean SO very much. So, I wish you good luck, and many many blessings to you, your Mom, your family, and your friends.
person eien no ren
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nyan... even if you think you dont have nothing to live for, you will find something. Nobody and noone will ever replace your mother, that is true, but life goes on and I am sure she wouldnt have wanted you to die. You are her projection into the future, dear. THrough you your mother lives. You are entitled to your pain, that's true. Mourn her long and hard for a mother is unique. Please know that you would do more good living a good life like she surely wanted for her child. I lost my father when I was young, I miss him still but I made it into my personal life goal to make him proud wherever he is. You will feel love once again, you will feel cared for once again... all these things will come to mean something for you once more, nyan. You will see... and if it doesnt you are entitled to call me a liar... but its true... be patient.
If you dont have nobody to talk to please contact me, nyan. I dont know you, but I do care. And I care deeply. So, for your sake and for your blessed mother's sake, live darling! Dont let grief take away your mother's hopes and dreams. ok?
A good, hard hug, nyan...and God bless you.
person Sama
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Girly, I am so so sorry about all that. I mean...gods I can't even fandom what your going through or say I can understand your experience because I never been through what you have. Losing your mom like that so suddenly its understandable at what your feeling and I just...gods...I feel so awful to hear about your mom and how upset you are. If you ever need someone just to talk to, really listen to? I'll be more then happy to lend all ears. My email yahoo address is sakurablossom930@yahoo.com. Please email anytime, I'll respond back and be a helping friend. ^^ With all love and care, Sama. Take care girly.
person Tiffany
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what you are going through exactly yet I do. I do know because my mom has vulvar cancer level 3. She doesn't have the will to live any more. She tried to kill her self twice in a week. Right now she is in a mental hospital. When she comes out she has to take radiation which she terrified to do. If you every want to talk my verizon email is loveless1313@verizon.net.
person sharingan.swirl
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh sweetie! I can't fault you for something like this. I know how hard that is. My father died 2 years ago, and I didn't think I'd make it through. Just keep on going, keep the rest of your family close. Remember your mother, cry, grieve. I send you my comfort (for what it's worth) and I know you don't know me, but if you ever have a question or just want some random person to listen to you, don't hesitate to e-mail. I am sad to see your story go, it was such a wonderful one, but your life takes priority.

Do take care of yourself. And I'm truly sorry that that had to happen to you.
Sincerely,
sharingan.swirl
person Debbie-kit
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey...
I sorry about your mother. I know what you're going through because my my father and little brother died of cancer too.
It really hurts. Take your time recovering, but I gotta tell you; it will never stop to hurt.
I still miss them. =(