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for Trouble in Paradise

by terranigma11

person LT
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amusing and hot. I'm looking forward to Sasuke's revenge!
person kyu77ryu
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaaaaaaahhh!!!

You're. So. Great.

Absolutely.

Many will die if you won't continue this.
person Nomme de Plume
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
seriously. my "naruto should consider killing himself so everyone feels bad for all the shit they've ever given him" muse snuck up on me while reading this chapter. that's a very hard muse to come by. i congratulate you on finding it! ^___^ (it's like a secret character in a video game or something, lol)

man, sasuke is the biggest bastard i've ever come across. and now i'm seriously dying to know what naruto's going to do. i mean, is he giving that letter to sasuke, cause with that picture on the back... omg. and what's this about ino? i can only assume it means something completely different than what it sounds like.

anyway, i really love this story! update soon!
person ladywolfTerri
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wah!!! *glomps, laughing* Oh shit!! Please tell me that letter is for Sasuke!! I can so see Sasuke running to the bathroom with a bloody nose after seeing the picture on the back!! especially if Naruto's letter was some kind of set-up!! *LMAO*

Will work on LLC.. just been busy working on some original stories..^^..
person Cesia
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O This chapter was so awsome! I was like, POOR NARUTO! I couldn't stop laughing at how lazy Shika is, and the ending was just hilarious! :D Oh, I'm sooooooo looking forward to the next chapter.
person kyosuke
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! i actually THOUGHT Sasuke was dying! Sasuke is such a #$%&ing @*%hole! I really hope Naruto gets him good!
schedule November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh... so well written! I like it a lot... I am dying to know what comes next... but I promise to wait patiently, nyan! Well done!
person ladywolfTerri
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ieee! You have me addicted to this story!!! Please continue it soon!!!

I love how Naruto fought back! But now I want to know what Sasuke will do, and will Sakura talk to Naruto and find out what is really going on??!!! Gah! So many questions!! Please tell me the humor will continue though!! I love the humor, and well the smut.. the smut rocks!! *glomps* Keep up the great work!!
person C
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I really liked your story, I like your interoperation of the characters, please keep up the good work.
person kyosuke
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is one of the interesting pieces of fanfiction ive ever read! Update today please! I love you.... <_<