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for Trouble in Paradise

by terranigma11

person mikarin
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so sorry you have lost someone so close to you. Please take your time and don't worry about anything but you and the rest of your family. Life at this moment in time is the hardest to live but you have to do it. Your mother will want you. So you have to. You must live the hardest and at the best of your abilities because she still has hopes in you. A parent always want her children to live life to the fullest even when we are no longer there. So you have to think of the best times and find the strength even when is not quite there to live one day at a time because you have your life to complete. So when you someday get together again you have something to talk about. Good luck living and love your life because she loves you.
person Velvetina
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd only just joined this story and I loved it. I wanted you to know that... and now on the otherside I understand you're need to stop writing after what has happened. When I lost someone very dear to me I stopped too so all I to say is that I am very sorry for your loss, you are a phenonomal writer but that until it feels right again you are right to stop. **Smile** I know this is my first review because as I said I'm kinda new but I know how you feel and wish that you feel better.

Good Luck
person Yukino (Yup FF.net)
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No no, please don't apologize. I know what it's like to lose somone close, and am more than willing to give you
all the time you need to feel better. *hugs* Just know that it's ok to cry, but please don't try to kill yourself
because even though we only know you through your writing, we still care about you. So pplease be strong, but
don't carry too much weight on your back either. ^-^ I truely am sorry for your loss...
person Meytal
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh god baby,
i hope you are reading this~
i just finished reading your story and i loved it....but what you wrote now broke my heart...it is so hard, and i dont want to even imagen what you are goin through
i hope you will gain the will to live, i dont care about the writting, but even though i dont know you i am hopping for you to be strong, if you need someone to talk to you can add me to your MSN or E-mail me to my email address, i will be there for you.
i hope you will be alright, pleas dont give up! <3<3<3<3 *much love*
person Meytal
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Meh, it did not post my email~ here it is - shallowsleep@hotmail.co.il, i am there if you want me to, we can always talk
person xBunni
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mou... That bites terranigma-san.. I hope you cheer up soon. Don't worry, I'm sure you're mother is happy wherever she is now~ ^^ Dont give up on writing, even if only to yourself. If writing is something you enjoy, it can become a great way of stress relief~ My mum died when I was about four or five years old, so I can't really say I remember anything about her, but I know that you will be able to get through it. You'll develope a new cycle to your daily routines. So please don't go off and talk about suicide so lightly, I have had a lot of unforturnate run-ins with the issue and I can tell you now that death is a coward's way out and a waste of the life you have been gifted with whereas so many children in this world don't even live to the age of even ten. So please make the most of what you are left with, ne? ^^ I left my email in case you wanted to chat or something, I cant promise I'll be much help, but I can relate a little to your situation and talk about it. I hope you do not give up on your passion for writing, terranigma-san is a great authoress, your style is just so unique and stands out in the spotlight. It would be a shame for it to rust away.
Ja, I hope terranigma-san cheers up soon, ne? ^^ You probably have a lot more than you may realise.
person dardlea
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I understand perfectly, you don't have to apologize. It's normal to break down after such an event, and you will need time to get better. I wish you good luck, and I will pray for both of you.
dardlea
person Allys
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am so very sorry for your loss.
I totally understand about you not wishing to continue. I only wish you health, happiness, strength and love.
I know that the chances of you reading this are slim to none but I had to try. Please take care of yourself.
person Rennii
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so incredibly sorry for your loss, and I wish you the best for the future. It was a good story till now, but I don't mind your haitus. I'll always be a support of this story, even if you never pick it up again :)

Wishing you the best,
~Rennii.
person Hestia
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey--don't do it--life may seem like shit now, but be like Naruto--be strong--things can change and tomorrow can be better. Your a clever writer and talented write, and you have brought a lot of joy in people's lives with this fun story. It doesn't matter if it is never finished--it still is a testiment to the good you have contributed to the world. Please try to believe that life is still worth living even if it seems as if everyone you love is gone and taken from you by an evil world. There are people who have the spirit of Naruto in them and can help you see the world in a different way--just hang on and one might show up tomorrow! All my sympathy, and feel free to email me if you need to have someone to talk about fighting the urge to die--Hestia