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for Trouble in Paradise

by terranigma11

person ladywolfTerri
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gah!!!... I'm dying for an update!!!! please tell me the reason Sasuke was out there so long was because of Iruka calling!!.. and that Naruto saves him before Kiba can screw him!... I mean, come on.. it's obvious that Sasuke doesn't want it!!...

Please update soon!!!!
person innerchild
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omfg... that was absolutely fucking brilliant. i'm... stunned would be an understatment. i love this story and i love you! i really hope you update soon, cause i really want to read what's gonna happen next. naruto with his hand around his dick while iruka turns on his webcam, sasuke butt naked, lying by a pool, handcuffed to a rail with a condom bearing kiba beside him, a disappearing act by gaara, and a hysterical ino.... holy fuck on white bread, that's all i got to say. and i'll say it again. holy fuck on white bread, you have to update soon, or i might just die from impatience! it's possible!

-inc
person Donedin
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I just started reading and this story is fantastic!! I really like this chapy, but I don't think I like the idea of Kiba and Sasuke getting it on... mostely cause sasuke doesn't wanna, but whatever. Can't wait for the next post! ^_^
person Ashley
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! I need more! It is sooo good!
person 3lildee
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great! you could totally put in a kiba/sasuke lemon there. I was all for it, and then all of a sudden, it goes to Naruto's view! awww. you should add that kiba/sasuke lemon in on the next chapter or something. well i can't wait for the next chapter.
person AnA La Pana83
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is my first time reading this story and i like it! That last chapter was WHORELARIOUS! But that Sasuke bastard had it comin'! Yay team Naruto. Anyway, i wonder what Kiba has in store lol. And i can't wait to see what happens with Sasuke and Naruto. Update soon!
person TheDeviant (too lazy to login)
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol, great chapter... i almost feel bad for sasuke... ALMOST!

Ad i agree with everyone else... there should be some sasunaru sex soon... why you ask? well, because sex is fun... plain and simple. (coughcough)

Update soon, this story is fantastic!

Much Love- TheDeviant
person pwnd!
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
1st of all i don't have n-ething against neji. i just can't really think of a neji/gaara it creeps me out lol but u do wat u must and don't think i have things against gaara cuz i luv him to death along with my little sasuke and naruto. heehee. o by the way the whole sasu/naru u have to admit thats a hot couple but besides wat u think there my fav. ;)
i like the new chappy but i have others. besides that i have so many unanswered questions i just might pass out
does THAT actully happen with sasuke and kiba or is he just scaring the shit out of the poor raven?
what happened to gaara? is he somehow still in the room thingy spying on naruto or somethin?
how much of naruto does iruka have to see?
i could go on and on but i don't want to disturb you.
thnxs 4 mentioning me, im looking forward to the future chapters i hope they come real qwuick like hee hee.
your loyale reader <3 <3 pwnd <3 <3
person pwnd!
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey it's me (again) *kicks computer in the ass and shouts "haha take this"* damn thing cut me off!! o well here you go!!! your loyale reader <3pwnd<3 (heehee XD)
person pwnd!
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok now im really pissed *shouts* "your loyale fucking reader <3pwnd!!!!!<3 it better of freakin wrote this!
p.s. happy late b-day wishes =)