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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter... just finished reading it for the second time!!...^^..oh... such sweet revenge!!... now all Naruto needs to do is slip another note to Ino from "Sasuke" telling her he is waiting for her by the pool and wants to act out one of his "secret sexual fantasies"... XD.. talk about the horror!! Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!..^^..
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A PS!!... Gyah!! I forgot other things I wanted to say... >.<... yeah...^^;;
Happy B-Day!!!!! *huggles*
also... Naruto should give Kiba a tip about Sasuke being out there and Ino will be showing.. or just that Sasuke being there... and when/if Sasuke confronts him... he can just say there's three reasons he won't date Sasuke... 1)He's a teme... 2) He doesn't date guys.. and third and most important... He won't date sluts...XD... now that would be a hell of a slap in the face!!...^^... Mkay... I'll stop bugging you now!!
Happy B-Day!!!!! *huggles*
also... Naruto should give Kiba a tip about Sasuke being out there and Ino will be showing.. or just that Sasuke being there... and when/if Sasuke confronts him... he can just say there's three reasons he won't date Sasuke... 1)He's a teme... 2) He doesn't date guys.. and third and most important... He won't date sluts...XD... now that would be a hell of a slap in the face!!...^^... Mkay... I'll stop bugging you now!!
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*grumbles and kicks AFF for cutting off the post*...
Was trying to say Happy B-day!!!
and that Naruto should definately tip Kiba about Sasuke being out there and maybe slip another note from "Sasuke" under Ino's door... something along the lines of how "he's waiting at the pool to act out one of his secret fantasies"... XD... maybe a bit more descriptive.. like how he wants Ino to "punish him for being a bad boy" or something...talk about Sasuke's worst nightmare incarnate!!
Also... when/if Sasuke confronts Naruto... he can give him three good reasons why he won't date him... XD
1) He's a teme.
2) Naruto doesn't date guys.
and most important...
3) Naruto doesn't date sluts..
*LOL* now wouldn't that be a hell of a slap in the face?!!.. mkay... I'll stop bugging you now!!
Was trying to say Happy B-day!!!
and that Naruto should definately tip Kiba about Sasuke being out there and maybe slip another note from "Sasuke" under Ino's door... something along the lines of how "he's waiting at the pool to act out one of his secret fantasies"... XD... maybe a bit more descriptive.. like how he wants Ino to "punish him for being a bad boy" or something...talk about Sasuke's worst nightmare incarnate!!
Also... when/if Sasuke confronts Naruto... he can give him three good reasons why he won't date him... XD
1) He's a teme.
2) Naruto doesn't date guys.
and most important...
3) Naruto doesn't date sluts..
*LOL* now wouldn't that be a hell of a slap in the face?!!.. mkay... I'll stop bugging you now!!
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
For a minute I was afraid that Naruto was really giving in to Saske, but then he left him there cuffed and naked ;)
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
We dont see enough evil Naruto about, i'm glad he didnt give in and gave the teme exactly what he deserved! A very intriguing chapter, i love it! Please update soon!! ^_^
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
KEEP THE CHAPTERS COMING! I LOVE YOUR WORK
but the deck part you could of turned that into a whole yaoi scene but i guess i kinda liked the way you made naruto such a little devil
BUT YOU MADE HIM MERCILESS....
o well i can't wait till the next few chapters are out! please! o please! OH PLEASE! dont leave this fic. unfinished!!!
but the deck part you could of turned that into a whole yaoi scene but i guess i kinda liked the way you made naruto such a little devil
BUT YOU MADE HIM MERCILESS....
o well i can't wait till the next few chapters are out! please! o please! OH PLEASE! dont leave this fic. unfinished!!!
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
don't listen to them! don't listen to them! (please these certain fans don't come and clobber me!) but man.... a neji/naruto or a garra/neji or something along those lines really just doensn't seem like it belongs in your story! oh by the way i luv gaara havn a gun! it'd b really funny if he went crazy in the future or somthin when neji's his boss and tries to blow his head off! (neji fans don't get mad ! get glad! =) neways u gatta admit it'd b funny!)
you HAVE to have a sasu/naru or naru/sasu sex scene in a couple chapters u just have to! oh by the way your so freakin creative! id never think about naruto hand cuff'n him to a pool ladder that was so enexpected but so awsome! WOOOOOHHHHH!!!!
you HAVE to have a sasu/naru or naru/sasu sex scene in a couple chapters u just have to! oh by the way your so freakin creative! id never think about naruto hand cuff'n him to a pool ladder that was so enexpected but so awsome! WOOOOOHHHHH!!!!
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn it, Sasuke and Naruto need to just go at it and release that sexual tension that has them both all twitchy XD It'd do us all some good ne? XD Good story, i look forward to more. ^^
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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
haha!
..love scheming naruto!
he's SO hot!
^^
..love scheming naruto!
he's SO hot!
^^
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome job really. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter...like...ALOT. I cant believe that (bitch) Sasuke. >< He's such a whore. But that's why we love him! HAHA and HA.
But, there's like, one thing confusing me- it seems like you're using "Jamaican" like it's a totally different language, which it isnt.It is, however, a "way of speaking" that sounds like a different language, but Jamaicans speak english. Either that, or it's a pun I'm not understanding (it might be the latter too ^^;;)
Sorry if it's just a joke I'm not understanding, but clear it up for me please. ^^
Other than that, I see no problems. Write more soon!
But, there's like, one thing confusing me- it seems like you're using "Jamaican" like it's a totally different language, which it isnt.It is, however, a "way of speaking" that sounds like a different language, but Jamaicans speak english. Either that, or it's a pun I'm not understanding (it might be the latter too ^^;;)
Sorry if it's just a joke I'm not understanding, but clear it up for me please. ^^
Other than that, I see no problems. Write more soon!