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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my God! Naruto is so cheeky... man that was tricky! Gosh i still hope that Sasuke is the eventual Seme...
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah... i almost forgot... Happy birthday to you... may all of your dreams come true~
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SASUKE TIED TO A POOL LADDER NAKED!! SASUKE TIED TO A POOL LADDER NAKED!! OMG THATS UNBELIEVABLE!! PLEASE UPDATE!! I WANT SO BAD TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SASUKE TIED TO A POOL LADDER NAKED!! SASUKE TIED TO A POOL LADDER NAKED!! OMG THATS UNBELIEVABLE!! PLEASE UPDATE!! I WANT SO BAD TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SASUKE TIED TO A POOL LADDER NAKED!! SASUKE TIED TO A POOL LADDER NAKED!! OMG THATS UNBELIEVABLE!! PLEASE UPDATE!! I WANT SO BAD TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I gotta say! This was awesome! I can't wait till the next chapter is up! ^O^ Great job dude, and... Oh please don't hate me, but is there perhaps a possibility for NejiGaara?
XDD Oh God! At first I was thinking to myself, 'Hmm, Naruto got over that a bit quick' Then when he pulled out the handcuffs I was all 'He isn't...!' AND HE DID! That was great how he left Sasuke out there! Pwned!
But yes! Great job, I eagerly await your next update!
XDD Oh God! At first I was thinking to myself, 'Hmm, Naruto got over that a bit quick' Then when he pulled out the handcuffs I was all 'He isn't...!' AND HE DID! That was great how he left Sasuke out there! Pwned!
But yes! Great job, I eagerly await your next update!
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. This chapter was hilarious.
Felt kinda bad for both Sasuke and Naruto during it though.
And I had finally thought we had a real sex scene going on. So close.
Felt kinda bad for both Sasuke and Naruto during it though.
And I had finally thought we had a real sex scene going on. So close.
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
rofl! I love it! And Happy Birthday - it's so sweet of you to update when you should be celebrating. You're so awesome.
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Sasuke deserved every ounce of that! Happy Burthday! Sorry that the only present i can give you is this review, hopefully that's enough. Update soon! Or else i'll die!!
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!! OMG!! That was soooo KAKOII!! I loved that!! ABSOLUTELY LUUURRRRVED IT!!! Somehow I knew Naruto was up to something!! LMAO! Job well done, my beloved! I bet Sasuke is shitting his pants!! Oh no...wait, he didn't have on any pants! *laughs so hard insides threaten to burst*
I hope, for all things good and pure, that Neji will be the first to find him like that and appraise Naruto more when he meets him!! Yea! Naruto should be given so much more credit and love.
1) The whole Sasuke screwing (excuse my obsceneties) Neji thing...WOW...That's all I can say. Hot though...but not as hot as it woulda been if Naruto was involoved! (They should all love Naruto! Yay Naruto and his adorable-ness-ness!)
2) Naruto and Hinata...(sitting in the tree! F-*-C-K-I-N-G!) Lol, hope that's not the case. Or at least, I'd like to know more on that. Hopefully Hinata is not so shy in this...actually no, then that'd be too OOC. Just a little shy...and only of Naruto, eh?
3) Is it just me or did Kiba make a pass at Naruto...hmm...maybe it was the beer!
4) Speaking of beer...Lee's drunken master state!! O-M-G!! I love it when that happens! It's just too funny and his face looks kinda kawaii!! *screams like a fan-girl who's missing her daily intake of prozac*
5) Gaara...*sigh* why won't you just admit that you're in love with Naruto?
Gaara: Because...I'm not. *glares*
Tara: But...you drew naked pictures of him and you blush when it's brought up. If you didn't like him why would you bother drawing naked pictures of him?
Gaara: I...I...ugh! Curse you and your *beep**beep*-ing *beep* You're lucky I don't have my sand in this! Wait...hold on...*grins maniacally and fishes out the AK-47* My precious..Oh my darling precious *strokes cheek with gun then frowns and holds it at arms length with pleading eyes* But-you...must not let me...*pulls it back against cheek and strokes it lovingly* But I must! My precious...*throws it against the wall and turns away* I must...not...give in...to...must-not...must-not...must...GYAH!! screw it! The hell with this-you're dead Tara! *starts chasing Tara round the post screaming maniacally*
Tara: Wait! No, spare me! I have...I have *trips and falls over a knocked out Lee* I have cookies!
Lee: *springs up and goes into a defensive stance* I will protect you Tara-san! I must avenge and stand by all things that are youthful and spread the love of cookies all around the world!
Okay...I have now officially...gone INSANE! See! This is what your stories do to me! Hurry and ADD!
Lee: What the world...needs now...is youth,
Sweet youth!
Tara: Oh, can it already you ignoramus!
ps: I wouldn't mind a bit of SakuNaru even if it's just one scene. Because Sakura obviously likes Naruto! We should see more of that...even though I so totally hate the heffa! That should get Sasuke envious, ne? And everybody loves a jealous Sasuke! *chuckles evilly*
I hope, for all things good and pure, that Neji will be the first to find him like that and appraise Naruto more when he meets him!! Yea! Naruto should be given so much more credit and love.
1) The whole Sasuke screwing (excuse my obsceneties) Neji thing...WOW...That's all I can say. Hot though...but not as hot as it woulda been if Naruto was involoved! (They should all love Naruto! Yay Naruto and his adorable-ness-ness!)
2) Naruto and Hinata...(sitting in the tree! F-*-C-K-I-N-G!) Lol, hope that's not the case. Or at least, I'd like to know more on that. Hopefully Hinata is not so shy in this...actually no, then that'd be too OOC. Just a little shy...and only of Naruto, eh?
3) Is it just me or did Kiba make a pass at Naruto...hmm...maybe it was the beer!
4) Speaking of beer...Lee's drunken master state!! O-M-G!! I love it when that happens! It's just too funny and his face looks kinda kawaii!! *screams like a fan-girl who's missing her daily intake of prozac*
5) Gaara...*sigh* why won't you just admit that you're in love with Naruto?
Gaara: Because...I'm not. *glares*
Tara: But...you drew naked pictures of him and you blush when it's brought up. If you didn't like him why would you bother drawing naked pictures of him?
Gaara: I...I...ugh! Curse you and your *beep**beep*-ing *beep* You're lucky I don't have my sand in this! Wait...hold on...*grins maniacally and fishes out the AK-47* My precious..Oh my darling precious *strokes cheek with gun then frowns and holds it at arms length with pleading eyes* But-you...must not let me...*pulls it back against cheek and strokes it lovingly* But I must! My precious...*throws it against the wall and turns away* I must...not...give in...to...must-not...must-not...must...GYAH!! screw it! The hell with this-you're dead Tara! *starts chasing Tara round the post screaming maniacally*
Tara: Wait! No, spare me! I have...I have *trips and falls over a knocked out Lee* I have cookies!
Lee: *springs up and goes into a defensive stance* I will protect you Tara-san! I must avenge and stand by all things that are youthful and spread the love of cookies all around the world!
Okay...I have now officially...gone INSANE! See! This is what your stories do to me! Hurry and ADD!
Lee: What the world...needs now...is youth,
Sweet youth!
Tara: Oh, can it already you ignoramus!
ps: I wouldn't mind a bit of SakuNaru even if it's just one scene. Because Sakura obviously likes Naruto! We should see more of that...even though I so totally hate the heffa! That should get Sasuke envious, ne? And everybody loves a jealous Sasuke! *chuckles evilly*