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for Trouble in Paradise

by terranigma11

person Tara...(again)
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just noticed something...are all my reviews normally that long? My gosh! I talk too much...or in this case "type" too much! Geddit? Geddit? *laughs at own silly joke but then realises no one else is and stops* *crickets do what they do and a tumbleweed rolls by*
Well..errm...ah..*scratches nose nervously and runs to the door*
Hurry and update soon!!
person Jessica
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, this is just too good to leave rampant! You must come back and tame it soon!...Really good storyline! I love the AU, you utilize the ship and their predicament well! I'm loving every bit of this story! The small taste of rutting was delectable and the declaration of war is definitely riveting to the point where I will forego sleep to find out what Naruto has planned next!...I'm also curious as to see where their past and that letter will catch up to them!...So many questions, and I feel happy knowing that you are taking your time in exploring every aspect of the plot and answering inquiries at a timely pace! Really great job; keep up the good work! Hopefully, I'll talk to you soon! ^___^
person Nyuchan
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gnaaaa Naruto's meaaan ^.^

But Sasuke deserved it nonetheless. Hehe i love your story!
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was intense! I loved the pool scene! I feel kinda bad for Sasuke you know being left exposed on the poolside... but he deserved it! Well done, nyan! I am anxious to know what comes next!
person OMG!!
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahah man I tip my hat to Naruto! That was perfect! Oh and if Ino were to find him like that... *_* man hehe too good. Aww poor Sakura lost on her things! Oh and will Neji ever meet Naruto? How sad, and dude... Gaara's got a gun?!!? I'm loving this story to peices! I hope you update soon, thank you for the long chapter, I really enjoyed it!
person wendyghost
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sexy, funny and hot two thumps up!
person blu_dragon
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just got finished reading the latest chapter.THe revenge was great. I had a feeling that was coming I can't wait to see what happens next. Also have a wonderful bday. I hope u get to update soon.
person kyosuke
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter! God you really had me going there till Naruto cuffed him! That was sweet revenge indeed! Happy birthday you really deserve it! And update soon as a gift to us! (-;
person Nomme de Plume
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm so sorry i stole your idea!!!

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but if you let me play off one of your other ideas (aka the fake suicide), then i can get a special fic out just for you! please let me! *bows, hands and forehead on floor* just e-mail me with your permission, and i'll get right on it!

now, on to the chapter. OMFG! you're evil! i can't believe you'd have naruto leave sasuke like that, though he deserved it, the bastard. i was laughing my ass off this entire chapter, ya know? i can't wait for the next one!

and happy birthday!! (that's math i can't even do! though, thinking about it, i could probably figure it out with time. i won't though. too troublesome) ^____^
person layke
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was smoking!!!! Naruto is one hella good actor!!! Even I wasn't expecting such a turn of events... I thought he was going all ultra-uke teary eyed. Good for Sasuke! He totally deserved that!!!
Ahahaha... anyway, your story rocks just please continue writing!!! =^.^= Toodles!