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for Trouble in Paradise

by terranigma11

person Vixenia
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG THAT WAS FREAKING AWESOME. I LOVE THIS STORY. UPDATE IT SOON. OMG HAHAHAHAHA GET KIBA TO TAKE A PICTURE. NYAHAHAHAHAHA
person crazyforkakashi
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!


I like dthe end . Naruto walking away with his clothes under his arm.
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! And before I start, I'm really sorry about what happened with that chapter. That's happened to me before, and I also lost all inspiration for the story I was writing. I hope you get back into the groove soon, since I adore 'Our Most Featured Naruto', and I'll love it even more once Sasuke and Naruto get together. For whatever reason, I don't like the GaaNaru/NaruGaa pairing. It's just...not working for me. But the fact that I still read the story at this point while he and Sasuke aren't together yet, is proof of how much I love the story. I've quit stories in the past, believe me :P yours are simply too funny to quit!

Alright, now to this story, I am loving it to death so far, but I'm a bit disappointed to see that there's gonna be lots and lots of angst, since I really liked the rather light hearted tone of the the first chapters. Of course, I have no doubt that it will still be an awesome story, so I'll still be reading and reviewing as much as I can. I love the interaction between Sakura and Sasuke, and how you've written her. That 10 foot pole thing had me laughing my ass off XD

Oh, and just to let you know, that part where Naruto's painting Sasuke's walls actually inspired me to write my first ever yaoi fic (extremely light shonen-ai doesn't really count). It's completely unrelated to the story, but since it was a scene you wrote that inspired it I'll give you credit. I hope that's alright ^_^'

You're doing a kick ass job, keep it up! :D
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, this last chapter was horrifying, but wonderfully written. My expression while I read it was something like this :O and this O_O. Insanely intense. Poor Naruto! I can't wait for him to get Sasuke back - and I hope you mean sexy in a good, non-het-sex way :P because when I read that Ino gets lucky, my stomach got unsettled, heh. Ooh, unless she has sex with Naruto and Sasuke gets all jealous and posessive - hopefully that's what it is. Either way, I just can't wait for the next chapter, you're doing awesome here! ^_^
person crazyforkakashi
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it .Naruto wrote a note with himself drown on the back naked and he does not know it .This should be good . Please update soon.

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person aria
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor Naruto! but i like the last chapter.
can't wait for the next. please update soon~~~~~~~
person Anon
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I cant beleive how good this fic is. I also cant believe what an evil ass Sasuke can be!

You are a great and i hope you dont give up on this!
person C
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your right it was sad but good. Sasuke is such an ass, but what an ass ^_^ I can't wait to see what Naruto does next.

Peace
person dut
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter... It is kinda sad to see Naruto crying like that but yeah its a great chapter.. I'd like to reconfirm and to ease my curiosity... it IS an eventual SASUNARU fic right? Sasuke the seme neh?
person Mija
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh I just found this fic and I have to say I am loving it like mad, its hilarious and smexy and a bit freaky, with the awful prank Sasuke pulled on naruto, that was soo uncalled for, that was mean, soooooooo cant wait for naruto to get his revenge, and this time oh pleaseeeeeeee dont let Sasuke win in the end, ok I want him and Naruto together, I will admit that since I am an avid SasuNaru/NaruSasu fan, but really for once i want to see Naruto get Sasuke GOOD...make Sasuke BEG..lol..great fic, hope to read more soon, I thank you for the wonderful read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)