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for Fraternity

by oraday

person chyny
schedule December 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i really want to see haw your story ends
person Ikippiki
schedule September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww sasuke is worried... poor guy. Your story is so much fun!!
I REALLY like the way you wrote it, it's funny and original... please update soon!!
person Arly
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this.
person Carly
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're the one who got me so into ItaKyu with this story.
It's nice to have something different once in a while.
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!
person Kayo
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah! This story is packed with so much humor--I actually found myself laughing outloud sometimes (I'm not a laugh out loud type of person, you see). The characterizations are wonderful! I <3 Kyuubi! I <3 SasuNaru forever. Which reminds me, personally I would love to see a descriptive sasunaru lemon only because otherwise I feel a little disappointed with the others. At the same time though, the dialogue and thoughts usually make up for it (even if my inner fangirl is complaining at the lack of detail). And I am still confused! With the whole Orochimaru thing. Actually, I think I have it figured out, kinda... I really like the style of this story though--it's just a different way to exploring the characters; it's very interesting and my mind naturally fills in the extra detail. It's amazing actually how you, um, how to phrase this? Cue it so well (like a play but not really). Like you only use one word to describe the action, but it's the perfect word and the only one needed. And I have to give you kudos for that because it's very skillfully done. So! I'm really enjoying this story so far and I can't wait for another amazing update!
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww you gotta update!! i wanna see some sasunaru action!!! PLZ update!!!
person rhina
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love this.
Pls update.
person qwerty
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Where is Gai-sensi?!" lmao So funny
yeah, 2 more chapters! I really like this story. Update!
person zaira
schedule July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is so fucking fantastic!! please, update sooner than possible!^.^ I'll be waiting!(you are a genius...)