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This story is great! I loved the whole shoving them in a closet deal. And the fact that it actually worked! I never thought of Gaara and Neji as a pair before, but I like it in this story:D Please update soon.

naruto got HIS uchiha*knw clue how to spell sasukes last name*

and neji and gaara are so hot together

Definitely drop me a line when you update, I wouldn't want to miss it. I really hope that you have good things planned for our little cute side-couple. I really like Neji and Gaara as a pairing, so thanks for putting them together. It did feel a bit rushed how fast they turned around their feelings, but still very fun to read.

This fic is friggin' hilarious.
Kind of rushed and...random, but still funny.
I wouldn't mind reading more if you post it.
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Hey! I loved chapter 3!...I love the pairing Neji/Gaara!..but I hope this doesn't sound mean, I'm just trying to help you..The sex scene wasn't that great compared to the first chapter sex scenes..Just a suggestion..but maybe you could get it beta'd??..I'm not trying to be mean, I'm just suggesting, it's a great plot, but it needs a little fixing..so thanks though for your freat story!!..pleasee update soon!!..and please don't hate me!..Im only trying to help!!..thanks

LOL!!! Alright, I know I said this last time, but there’s really no other way to describe it, so I’m just going to say it: that was HILARIOUS!!! I thoroughly enjoyed that chapter a ton and your author’s notes as well. I love the way you write the authors notes like they are from the end of one of those old TV shows from the 50’s or 60’s. It was getting to the point where I had to stifle my laughter so I wouldn’t wake people up.

However, as much as I hate to dampen the mood, I have to say that sometimes during Gaara’s and Neji’s little *hot* scene there, it got a little confusing on who was speaking, or thinking, so just watch out for that while writing chapter 4. Alright, that’s all I have to say in the way of constructive criticism. My best wishes for you and your writing.


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who needs a real plot? it's the smutty love that counts!
i hope sasuke gets to fuck naruto senseless soon..!!

You story has just the right amount of Sasu/Naru and Ita/???, because lets just face it Itachi with anyone is just plain HOT!!
Your story has me rolling over and laughing when Naru talks to Kyuubi on the phone while Sasu molests Naru.

Just one word......TASTY!!!

this is sooooooooooooooo cool e-mail me when u update

Yay, another update sooner rather than later. That's always a good thing.

I do have one comment to make that disturbed me a bit. Our two lovely heroes of the story (Sasuke and Naruto) orgasmed...that means that they (excuse me cause I'm going to be blunt) jizzed in their pants and didn't do anything about it. They just went on with their happy little lives with a mess in their pants. I know that this was probably just a small oversight, but you really should have something about them changing the clothing that they have soiled. Cause the fact that they just left for the movies without doing a darn thing is really bothering me.

Funny stuff, can't wait for the next chapter.