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good plot and grammar it has a nice pace and yet it hooks the readers almost immediatly

Wow dude! YOU ARE SOOOO AWSOME! Creams pants....

lol, ooh I just found this fic and I am totally loving it, its sooo funny..poor poor naru, so dense as to what Neji and gaara wanted, but he sure picked it up from Sasuke pretty fast, lol, nice start, cant wait for more, and I just have to add that the comments you make at the end, the authors notes sort of?? they soo remind me of the old way they used to intice you to watch the next episode of a soap opera, too funny, I love it, ty for sharing, hope to read more soon, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

Oh this is sooo great. A nice change of pace from all the angsty serious stuff out there. This could stand to be written out a bit more but sometimes the simplicity really helps add to everything. And I vote for Sasuke and Naruto to get it on! It'd also be funny if Kiba tried something on Hinata in the theater which got Neji all freaked out. Congats on making this really cute and funny and yet sexy at the same time!

AWESOME FIC!!!!!! keep it up, and pleeeeeeease update soon!!!

^^ Poor naru-chan hes going to loose his virginity before the nights over. I think Gaara and Naji might get it on, and ME WANT KYUUBI! So please hurry and update =3

I love your story!!! The first chapter had me in fts of laughther, my favorite part was when Sasuke said " I swear, that as soon as I find something I'm attracted to, I'm going to jump whatever it is and fuck the living daylights out of it." I nearly fell outta my chair from laughing so hard! You also have a unique writting style, writting in 4 povs must be difficult! Im going to read the 2nd chapter now and look forward to futer chapters! Ja!

Oh my God that was hilarious! LOL!!! I absolutely love the way you wrote this. It really has a way of drawing the reader in, and not just because you are actually talking to the reader either. The changing points of view really add to the fic as well, and surprisingly, there isn’t any confusion about whose point of view it is either.
I must admit that the fic seems to be moving almost at warp speed, but I find myself not even minding that. It’s fitting, and you really have a way of conveying Sasuke’s, and Naruto’s innate sexiness. My only advice to you would be to look over your chapters before posting them so that you don’t miss the grammatical errors in the fic. Other than that, you’re doing great and I look forward to your next chapter. My best wishes for you and your writing.


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that was good! I love how Itachi and Kyuubi keep going at it the whole chapter! please make an updation soon! the only flow is that it needs to be double spaced

Hurry you must update! I LUV Kyuubi! And its really funny how possesive Itachi and Sasuke are ^^; But I want more KYUUBI! YAY Kyuubi! And poor Naru-chan, hes so clueless =3