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February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hurry with the next chapter!!
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February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha, I'm so ready for Kyubbi to kick some snack ass.
I just found this and I'm already addicted.
I love the ItachiXKyubbi, SasukeXNaru-chan, controllable seme NejixGarra.
Plz, tell me that was Kyubbi who shot that snake.
Plz, update as soon as you can.
~Venny
I just found this and I'm already addicted.
I love the ItachiXKyubbi, SasukeXNaru-chan, controllable seme NejixGarra.
Plz, tell me that was Kyubbi who shot that snake.
Plz, update as soon as you can.
~Venny
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
why! why do you leave me hanging! please update soon!
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ZOMIGAWSH!!! you're not done are you?! T_T keeep going~~~ ^_________^ heeheehee
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, may be it's just me and not liking POVs, but it looked like downright bad. I'm sorry for bring destructive. If you want a constructive piece, here you are. *deep sigh*
"teme" is used as a PRONOUN . Yes, it is pejorative, but still. Just find all the "teme" in your little "work of art", replace them mentally with "you,bastard" and see what happens. It is overall a simple guideline to follow.
I can propose an even better one though : don't know - don't write. Works every time. You might want to check it out.
Same applies to other scraps of fangirl japanese. They do not serve to create local colour, but rather to impoverish the style.
"teme" is used as a PRONOUN . Yes, it is pejorative, but still. Just find all the "teme" in your little "work of art", replace them mentally with "you,bastard" and see what happens. It is overall a simple guideline to follow.
I can propose an even better one though : don't know - don't write. Works every time. You might want to check it out.
Same applies to other scraps of fangirl japanese. They do not serve to create local colour, but rather to impoverish the style.
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, i love this story very cute, some of the parts are a little boring and i think that u should update, well thanks for writing this story and update!!!!
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the nice descriptive lemon as well. Story's really good so far, so keep up the good work.
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December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ARGH! *pulls hair* The stupid ANBUs!! *bashes them up with a fork*
*bash bash bash* SasuNaru Lemon soon!? WoooHoooo!! I can't wait!!!
Thanks for the update alert :)
*bash bash bash* SasuNaru Lemon soon!? WoooHoooo!! I can't wait!!!
Thanks for the update alert :)
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December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Updates, Updates, Updates, Updates, Updates, Updates, Updates, Updates, Updates, Updates... Please, thank you =]
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December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would love full blown description with the thoughts. OOO That would be such a turn on. Um....oops pervertedness kicking in. I love your stories A LOT. I can't wait for the next installment. Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays and all that jazz. see-ya