rate_review Reviews

Great chapter!) Though I was hoping for Sasu/Naru lovin'. Guess I can wait. I would love to read the full blow description of when they finally do get to have some fun.

Why is Orochimaru a bastard? Maybe cause he was born that way.

Why couldn't we spend more time with Neji and Gaara? Cause there are more than those two in this story?

Who the hell got shot?! Don't know, have to wait for the next chapter. Hoping it is Orochimaru, a girl cam dream, right?

Will Kyuubi finally kick some ass, preferably snake ass? I really, really hope so.

Sorry about that, had to be a smart ass. Looking forward to the next update.

Briryan

*squee i love itakyuu ^_^. and good plot idea. emm i only read about the first chapter and half so far so i dont know if you get better later on, but you should try to make it flow better, the sentences are pretty choppy.

oooh and sasuke says hn a liiiittle too much. but other than that, great job :D

*reads a few more chapters* yayyy you did get better :) and less hnns too ::jumps up and down excitedly lol 3 reviews in a row *sweatdrops

Oh! Please do a descriptive Lemon. That would be great. I like the format for the rest of the story but it would be great to get a descriptive lemon for their first time together. :) :)

i think u should make the lemon descriptive. i think all 9 chapters were real good! update soon!

I like this story, I have to read each chapter more than once to understand sometimes and I really like the idea of you writing out a full out lemon for Sasuke and Naruto... OH!!! That would be so... so juicy!!!

Why is the entire story in italics?

Hi, I really like your story so could you please send me an e-mail when you update your story? Thanks. My e-mail address is kunoichi of darkness 2006 @ gmail.com( be sure to take out the spaces).

OMG! I sense SasuNaru lemon in the next chapter!!~
Thanks for the update alert ^___^!