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for Fraternity

by oraday

person sherine
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
chapter 5 still reading love the story it totally captivated me can't wait to see what gaara and neji's payback will be. please send me an update
person sherine
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
forgot to add my email pumkimbat17@yahoo.com
person Izzy
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehehehehehehe i looooooove it!!!! u doing great! i just finfished chappie 5, plz send a update for chappie 6 and beyond plz, keep it coming and i love it

edward_elric_forever15@yahoo.com``
person Ladyfox39
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Blank stare* That was REALLY.....somethign else.
person sts0519
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please alert me when you add new chapters
person Kay
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering, if you could do a story about itachi and kyuuba background in this story?
person Carla
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want to be added to your emailing list please! I am very interested to see where you are going to take this story and still waiting for the sex scene between Sasuke and Naruto!

Carla
person Mija
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o_0........omg are all perverts possesive little bastids??? lmaoo omg all the perverts, itachi, Sasuke, Genma, and Kakashi, all they want to do is MOLEST lol soo funny really had me busting a gut, the whole genma thing was hilarious, but I gotta say, Iruka is a hellava lot more fogiving than I would EVER be, if a kid killed my family I would sooooooo want revenge, and does Sasuke know that Itachi was apart of the group that killed his family?? and that hes only raising Sasuke for a new challenge to see if he wasnt bored??? and does Kyuu know that Itachi was gonna KILL him??? ok all these people are bonkers, but I still love em hehe, and totally love the molestation thing they always want to do, and omg Naruto yells out in his head or to us of course "He's gonna RAPE me!" that was funny, loved it, and I thank you for the update reminder via emial, hope to recieve more of them in the future and I soo thank you for letting me know about the updates, that is very kind of you to do, ty so much for the update and the read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person Shadow Walker
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS FIC, the little flashes of sheer insane possesiveness that the Uchihas have are hilarious. I also love the entire relationship that Negi and Gaara have going. Please write more!
person Exane
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nuooO~~ no sasunaru smex yet ;_;!! but I must endure!! XD!! You'd better write a very hardcore one for them XD (don't have to if you don't wanna XD!)
hahaha, Genma is so funny XD!!
can't wait for the next update ^^! good luck with it XD