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Great chapter. A few kinks but i won't go into them right now. update soon plz. And it might be nice if you could alert me for new chapters. shundoridragon@yahoo.com

Ok, first of all, I think it is absolutely awesome that you included "Ren n' Stimpy" in your fic. That has got to be one of my all time favorite cartoons ever! Anyway apart from that, I actually read the fourth chapter when it was first updated, but I didn’t get the chance to review it until now, so I’ll do my best to remember everything I wanted to comment on.

Alrighty then, this chapter was great! Kakashi and Iruka were priceless, and Neji and Gaara are adorable. Now that I have read the fourth chapter, I think I have to say I prefer Neji as seme and Gaara as uke, but a demanding uke. Based on their personalities it really does make the most sense for them both to act the way you portrayed them. Call it a lack of imagination, but I never thought to portray them like that, and neither has anyone else. That definitely warrants a gold star in your book for originality.

Is this going to turn into a serious fic? It’s not so much that I dislike serious fics, it’s just that this one is so funny, and I would hate for it to loose that element. If you want to make the plot line a little more serious, that’s cool, I still will read the fic, just PLEASE don’t loose the humor.

Oh, and there was no confusion for me in this chapter at all. It was fantastic and I can’t wait to see who Itachi was talking too or find out if Kyuubi will kick some ass. I look forward to the next installment of “Fraternity”. My best wishes for you and your writing.


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omg you had me busting a gut, Gaara is soooo bossy but still Uke that is soo hilarious, I will not walk around like this and you have to serve me so we will be skipping classes..lmaoo too funny, and ooh poor poor Iruka Run Ruru Run! hehe, but you know Iruka will like it and oooh Naru wants to make out?? and hes a straddling Sasukes hips?? well Naru if you didnt want to be molested then you just messed up royally lol, loved the whole fish thing, that was too cute, and ooh it has to be Oro who called or someone from Akatsuki, and yes when will Kyuu kick some butt?? and awwwwwwwww Itachi is concerned for his brother and Kyuu...soo cute, he will do it cause he doesnt want them to be hurt if he refuses gotta just love him here..ok I shall await next chappie, looking foward to it, ty for emailing me on the update, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

urgh! the suspence!! Why does gaara, neji and itachi and kyuubi get their lemon and not sasuke and naruto >anyway can't wait for the lemon!! (really, you're killing me now!)

*squeal* I LUV uke naru, hes soooo lufable =3 And the one who called Itachi was the Akatsuki leader, its kinda easy to tell. This story seems like one of those drama shows you watch, especially when you ask questions at the end like that. And YAY for Kyuubi still ^^

Awesome, keep up the good work. Very creative, and well written!! XD

Awwwww...what a cute chapter. Good for Naruto for getting Iruka and Kakashi together. :) You have me a bit worried with all the Itachi phonecall stuff (oh noes!) But really, I didn't think that the story was going to take this many plot-twists. I was wrong. Good stuff, keep it up.

omg this was hilarious, I loved it, and again your authors note at the end sounds so soap opera like, and omg Neji and Gaara got it ON lmaoo loved that part, but hmmmmmm Naruto wants to set up Iruka and Sasuke knows a perverted por addicted Kakashi hehehe, this could be fun...and I totally laughed my ever loving butt off when Ino said why are all the cute guys gay and Kiba said Im not gay, and she said exactly, by, hehe, my sister laughed when I told her, of course I left out it was a Naruto fic, since she dont get my obsession with anime lol, anyhow I loved it, and the part where Sasuke wanted to hide behind Naruto when he saw Ino and Sakura eyeing him and then he groped Naru hehe, ooh and really you just gotta love a possesive Sasuke..thank you so much for emailing me about the update, I would ty ever so much if you continue to do so, again ty ty ty for the update report, huggles and smiles Mija, and ty for the good read...:-)

Wow, you have such a vivd imagination. Keep on going even if there is no "real" plot *cough cough* it still is a good read....^^
Ja Ne

Lawl, yeah I'm kinda wondering about the plot as well.
I figure the plot and the title have some soft of link...?
LMAO, omg Gaara and Neji in that damn closet was funny snd hot.
Nice work :D.