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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Only one way to describe this, HAWT!! Although a slight bit more description would turn this into RED HAWT!
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow i got to hand it to you, this rocks!
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES YES YES!! i love Naruto and Ino!
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love this story! keep up the good work chap
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this has got be possibly the best NaruIno smut out there!
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW that was THE!! best sex scene i have ever read in my life! i love this story! please update soon!
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES! that was awesome, keep up the good work!!
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, the title's weird, but the sex was hot--I love Naruto's lines. It's not clear what part of the story you are unhappy with--that author note was very tantalizing. Was it the quick orgasm recovery? The unlikeliness of getting off in public? Oh--I just thought of a nice variation--maybe Naruto should threaten not to stop unless Ino cums? Anyway, I love how you are writing Naruto--it's a fun variation on his character! Thanks for putting part 2 up so soon!!
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice you should do a threesome with tenten involved.
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING! This is unbelievably HOT! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!