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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
For something so short, this sure was good!I can't wait to see what Naruto does to her when he can actually take his time. You set up the premise of the story very well for such a short story. I know they're called ficlets for a reason but I'd love to see something a little longer.
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good. More please. Lol. I thought it was going to go further :(
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gosh--hot stuff--it makes me want to read and write heterosexual stuff again. I look forward to reading the other "kinks"! Thanks for sharing this!
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This could get interesting.
I'd like to see more.
I'd like to see more.
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November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Torture is right! Damn that was hot! A big plus that it's well written and about my favorite Naruto coupling! Now, hurry and get the real smut out here!
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this looks good. Try to add tenten in for a threeway or some other girl.
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Such a TEASE! I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon!!!
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, thats a nice opening chapter. Very original with Naruto's attitude. Like the originality. The first chapter makes the rest of the fic sound very promising. Can't wait for the next chapter to be up. Hope its up soon.
Farezzz
Farezzz
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November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
When these two are well written I love this pairing so I can't wait to see where you go with them!
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sweet story i can't wait till the next chapter comes out