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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ne, how come in the last chapter the dictionary could accurately interpret anything that was said and in this chapter it can't figure things out without more information? Stupid dictionary is a tease. Naruto wants his money back.
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmn. I like this story, alot. I definately cant wait to read more! Great job!
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I quite liked the begining of your story. It's huge amount of potential for humor and... well just story made me really want to read the rest of the story. I'm still enjoying the story, however what began as a dictionary that could assertain the meaning behind anything that is said, suddenly became a talking dictionary that didn't understand 90% of what was being said. It showed no hesitation in the frist (and even the second) chapter, however the third and suddenly it doesn't know exactly what someone means?
Seriously, this story is great and it is fun, but this discrepency really takes away from the strength of the story. I think you should really consider what your doing with this dictionary before changing it even further.
Hope I haven't sounded negative, because that's certainly not what I'm aiming for and hope you keep up the good work adn write more.
Kim
Seriously, this story is great and it is fun, but this discrepency really takes away from the strength of the story. I think you should really consider what your doing with this dictionary before changing it even further.
Hope I haven't sounded negative, because that's certainly not what I'm aiming for and hope you keep up the good work adn write more.
Kim
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well good luck with the papers and have a happy Thanksgiving too! I love the Neji twist! I like the dictionary's new skill--and the new word--it's great to see Naruto seeing himself as desireable to Neji. It will be fun to see what you do with Neji-Naruto--I kind of like the idea of Naruto liking being wanted, admired, so much he plays up to Neji. But I'll wait and see what you come up with after enjoying your holiday--Thanks for shairing!
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanksgiving already?
Hmmm... well I'm japanese so I didn't have an idea of it... hehehe
Please let Sasuke come back! Ohhh... and the dictionary speaking? Awesome!
Ja ne!
Hmmm... well I'm japanese so I didn't have an idea of it... hehehe
Please let Sasuke come back! Ohhh... and the dictionary speaking? Awesome!
Ja ne!
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A hint of Neji/Naru-ness! Yay! Sasuke man, hurry ya lazy ass up and come into the story already! Got-damn!
This dictionary is certainly proving to be verrrry useful. But I have to ask. If Sakura doesn't like Sasuke anymore, who does she like? Or was that just implied because Lee needed a boost-up? Re-assurance?
Can't wait for next chapter!
This dictionary is certainly proving to be verrrry useful. But I have to ask. If Sakura doesn't like Sasuke anymore, who does she like? Or was that just implied because Lee needed a boost-up? Re-assurance?
Can't wait for next chapter!
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. I like this story. I haven't really liked a story in a while...this can only lead to one conclusion...YOU MUST UPDATE!! (and I must go and read you're other stories...)
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that wasn't a bad place to leave it off at. it was a very very evil cliff hanger, though! i like that the dictionary has personality now. it did kind of remind me of harry potter, but not that much. besides, the dictionary is cooler than a possessed journal.
hope u update soon.
-inc
hope u update soon.
-inc
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a fantastic idea. I am really enjoying this story. I hope you can update soon and Naruto gets the answers he needs. I love the sarcastic edge of the dictionary.
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep the story going it rocks