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November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the fireworks idea! Im totally hooked to this story, as I said brilliant plot! I cant wait till he uses the dictionary on Sasuke, looking forward to futuer chapters!!
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gosh this actually has depth and touches some big issues of the series. I was sort of thinking it was going to be all about the sex, but this is much more literary and profound--impressive!
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh... Reihi!
Good move back there, I liked this chapter very much!
Can't wait for the next!
JA ne!
Good move back there, I liked this chapter very much!
Can't wait for the next!
JA ne!
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Does anyone KNOW about Naruto's special dictionary? And WHY did the shopkeeper give it to Naruto? *shakes head* DO they realize that Naruto's going to create chaos when he finds out people's secrets?
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. I wish Sasuke had been in this one, though. Also, Naruto's birthday always makes me depressed, but it's okay. I like the way you depicted it, and yes, I did like that you drew from you HTtF universe. Love that story^.^
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!) Glad Naruto could do something nice to the villagers. Too bad they couldn't be nicer to him. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah, that was sweet. i can't wait to see what other stuff he reads in his dictionary. so, hope you update soon.
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy bishiznat this is totally wicked
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh that was just beautiful, I loved it, although my poor little heart ached for Naru baby, all he wanted was to make them happy, and all they wanted was to make him miserable, so who are the many eyes that watched him, and Im guessin the single eye was Kakashi, but who are the other eyes?? do they know it was Naruto who gave the village that awesome gift?? cant wait for the next chapter, Love this, ty, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it please write more!!!