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for Naruto's Uchiha Dictionary

by BishounenKrazed

person Allys
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Zomg, I'm loving this XD. Some of the things Neji said had my eyes popping, LOL. And Sasuke was adorably defensive, while Naruto was adorably clueless (as usual) :D. I loved when he called Neji a dumbfuck and that fact that he did it to his face was even better XD. LOL, and him offering to castrate Neji was priceless. God why can't I have a dictionary like that?? Oh and he came to apologise :huggles Sasuke and the authoress: The best friends necklaces are really sweet, I can't wait to see him give it back and confront Sasuke about it. and I'm really excited about Here's to the Fox too XD. Thank you so much for the update - Hooray for summer holidays XD.
person OHMYGOSH O.O!
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! Finally chappie 4, thank you so much. Hyuuga Neji definitions are so funny, Hyuuga that lecher XD! I look forward to chappie 5, keep up the good work!!
person Mikra
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! And aww.. poor Sasuke ^^
person Zrina
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved it!!! the necklaces were so CUTE! I love how naruto can be smart and yet clueless at the same time, lol. looking forward to more!
person dragonlady sakura
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! These two are so freaking adorable. Sasuke and Naruto have never been cuter together. I love the plot of this very entertaining story. Can't wait for more chapters!
person littleolmee
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Such a sweet chapter, love clueless Naruto just now figuring out what was meant by Neji. Wow, Neji is a perv. LOL! Best Friend necklace, so cute.
person VRon8899
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You sooooooooooo need to update!!! XD Love it ^_^; And you don't need to take it any faster, i love the pace awesome job!!q
person hanyou-elf
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well, let me say first and foremost, i loved this chapter. the innuendo, the teenaged drama, and naruto's lack of stupidity made me happy. ^_^ you have, yet again, impressed me very much with this story, simply because of the way you characterize everyone. and can we say uber cuteness with the way Sasuke so shyly admitted to his folly? *kawaii!*

the touch with the dictionary and neji and sasuke was pure genius. i must admit that i loved to read about naruto's innocent misunderstanding until he had help clarifying it all up. i love that the naruto you write is adorably oblivious and yet quite intelligent. if he weren't, he wouldn't have found a good use for his new-found dictionary, ne? and i love that you continued the continuity of the story by making naruto remember that sasuke hadn't left a note of any kind. but how is he going to react now that naruto has the other half of the necklace? *ohs... cliffing!*

neji was perfect. he was an arrogant ass, he was pretentious and he was so caught up in himself i'm surprised he didn't fall over. he was goading our handsome blond hero (who played braindead!) and sasuke was protecting him like the wonderful, duty-bound knight he wants to be. and of course, my favorite line in naruto's defense: "Come on to Naruto, touch Naruto, even breathe the same air as Naruto, and I’ll have you castrated by your own kunai." *giggles* so like sasuke, so like sasuke.

anyways, great job once more with this chapter. i'm looking forward to where you're intending to go with this story, is it going to be more friendship than relationship or is it going to grow and you'll surprise me? which ever way works though and i'm super excited about the next chapter. i would say update soon, but i see that you're going to update httf and that just makes me squee, so i won't rush you on anything. ^_^

great job!
~hanyou-elf
person monecque
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well i have to say that this story is one of the best i have
read. it is rare for me to get in grossed so much so that i can hear the story as i read it.
Please Please update sooooon
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...................KYA!!! God, this is the best of your stories. XD So cute!! *glomps Sasuke and Naruto* I love this. I love it. And I'm so happy you updated. =P

Sorry, a little hyper, but still. Naruto's still a little dense. It's so obvious Sasuke's in love with him! ^^ And that whole fight between Sasuke and Neji...hah. Beautiful. Sorry Neji, neither in my story or Nomme's will you get Naruto when Ssuke is concerned. =P