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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg. please continue!
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April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Neee~This chapter was so good! I was practically drooling at your description of Naruto. Of course, there weren't the traditional fetishes that I have for him but the way that I pictured him was so hot! *drools* Anyway, I'm glad to see this story back in action; it's definitely been a while. The last translation in the dictionary was sweet and I love both Hinata and Sasuke's presents for Naruto. (Thank goodness this is a Sasuke and Naruto story, though. *laughs nervously*)
<3
~Endless
<3
~Endless
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April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really cute! Hehe, and if Naruto really did "destroy" his orange training clothes during training, he can't really wear that outfit again unless he buys more, can he? One thing I noticed that may or may not be an error, when you mentioned that Hinata's gift was the most expensive thing he owned--well, it can't possibly rival the Hokage necklace Tsunade gave him in the canon in value, can it? I guess you could say the necklace doesn't exist in this fic (which is a little sad for me b/c I like the symbol and message behind Tsunade's gift) but do whatever. Aside from that tidbit, I like this chapter and I'd like to see what else Naruto does with the help from this dictionary. Ahh...all that potential for mischief, hehe.
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was [for lack of a better word] awsome! i'm speachless! you should keep going! i love everything you've writtlen so far! please post another chapter to this story asap! please! thank you!
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I still think that this is absolutely love this story and the rewrite/new chapter is great. I loved the ending *squishes Sasuke and naruto together*. I can't wait until the next update!
Keep up the wonderful work!
Ezzy
Keep up the wonderful work!
Ezzy
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww, I like it very much, but I can't wait for more Naru/Sasu interaction!!!!
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the birthday present that Sasuke got for Naruto! I really enjoyed the latest chapter, it fits well into the story and makes me eager to see where it will take us!! This idea is a really cool one and has so much potential!!
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
=^^= Yays, da pyon!!! Sooo much better, da pyon. =^^=
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAWWWWWWWW
how cute!!! Happy to see that you did't abandon this story :D
update soon please!!!"
how cute!!! Happy to see that you did't abandon this story :D
update soon please!!!"
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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I like the idea of Naruto having to wear new clothes, and Sasuke's reaction to those new clothes! I hope you update sooner this time. ^_~ ~ Jelp