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April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW. This version was WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY better then the original Chapter Three. And I totally loved it. It was so amazing! You've done a fab job and hopefully you'll be updating again VERY SOON!
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was so sweet!
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww! That chapter ended so sweetly! I love that Naruto has that book, otherwise he would still be oblivious to everything around him. :)
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OHHHH.
I'm really liking this story.
Naruto's attitude isn't the same as when he was younger, which is good, but he's just as michevious, which is also good.
I'm enjoying your twists and turns too.
That scandalous outfit of Naruto's was fantastic.
Keep up the good work, and I hope you update soon! 8D
I'm really liking this story.
Naruto's attitude isn't the same as when he was younger, which is good, but he's just as michevious, which is also good.
I'm enjoying your twists and turns too.
That scandalous outfit of Naruto's was fantastic.
Keep up the good work, and I hope you update soon! 8D
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG! I love this! keep it going! oh please! There isn't much i can say, i'm jealous i haven't thought of such an idea to use.
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*kyaa!* omg! you so... *speechless* why the cliffy?! *dies*
*ahem* now that all of that's out of the way, on to the review, ne?
it's been a while since i had the time to just sit down and read stories. but man, oh man am i ever glad that i found my way stumbling into this one. it's so good! i don't really know how else to explain it. all of your writing is impossibly good, which astounds me, but makes me happy as i'm such a fangirl anyways.
naruto is absolutely adorable. i love how you've got the dictionary as the catalyst for change. rather than making naruto something he's not, you're continuing to keep him in character and that makes me happy. naruto is adorably oblivious, but i love how he's using the dictionary to change. he's so cute, but in this last chapter... *can we say drool?* he was hot. i wanted to throw him against a wall and make sasuke have his wicked way with him! ^_^
i can't wait to see more interaction between sasuke and naruto. this is a sasu/naru/sasu story, ne? i can't wait for the main characters to have their chance to get at each other, drive each other crazy. i always enjoy the way you write sasuke, so i'm eager to see how this develops. i hope it's good... but knowing you, it will be.
and the first thing naruto did with the book? the yondaime firework. *loves naruto* which reminded me, i need to go and look up httf again. *loves that story!* naruto's birthday was indeed bittersweet. i felt so bad that he couldn't be with his friends to celebrate, and also a bit saddened by the fact that none would stay with him through the night, regardless of his insistence, but it makes sense. the only one i could even see being that stubborn would be sasuke, and he was out of town. you know, people always feel so bad for naruto on his birthday, especially considering the fact that no one wants to help him celebrate it, and you did a beautiful job counteracting that with naruto's insistence that he was okay, that he didn't need his friends to stay beside him, because he was used to it, sadly. great job! *loves the angst*
the second thing naruto did with the dictionary. very clever. using the girls as the bringer of change in naruto. and now that it's been brought to his attention, very clearly by three women he consider to be close friends, perhaps he'll continue to pour himself into some leather pants and attack uchiha-san with a nice whip? *not that i'm hoping or anything... * the party was a clever idea, i liked it.
you're full of creative inventiveness. *loves you* i think one day i'm going to just have to kidnap you and make you write for my enjoyment. *insert evil laughter* i can not wait for the next update on this and hope that it comes quickly. much love m'dear and here's wishes for a quick update. with more sasu/naru/sasu going on...
*dies* ... it's so long...
*ahem* now that all of that's out of the way, on to the review, ne?
it's been a while since i had the time to just sit down and read stories. but man, oh man am i ever glad that i found my way stumbling into this one. it's so good! i don't really know how else to explain it. all of your writing is impossibly good, which astounds me, but makes me happy as i'm such a fangirl anyways.
naruto is absolutely adorable. i love how you've got the dictionary as the catalyst for change. rather than making naruto something he's not, you're continuing to keep him in character and that makes me happy. naruto is adorably oblivious, but i love how he's using the dictionary to change. he's so cute, but in this last chapter... *can we say drool?* he was hot. i wanted to throw him against a wall and make sasuke have his wicked way with him! ^_^
i can't wait to see more interaction between sasuke and naruto. this is a sasu/naru/sasu story, ne? i can't wait for the main characters to have their chance to get at each other, drive each other crazy. i always enjoy the way you write sasuke, so i'm eager to see how this develops. i hope it's good... but knowing you, it will be.
and the first thing naruto did with the book? the yondaime firework. *loves naruto* which reminded me, i need to go and look up httf again. *loves that story!* naruto's birthday was indeed bittersweet. i felt so bad that he couldn't be with his friends to celebrate, and also a bit saddened by the fact that none would stay with him through the night, regardless of his insistence, but it makes sense. the only one i could even see being that stubborn would be sasuke, and he was out of town. you know, people always feel so bad for naruto on his birthday, especially considering the fact that no one wants to help him celebrate it, and you did a beautiful job counteracting that with naruto's insistence that he was okay, that he didn't need his friends to stay beside him, because he was used to it, sadly. great job! *loves the angst*
the second thing naruto did with the dictionary. very clever. using the girls as the bringer of change in naruto. and now that it's been brought to his attention, very clearly by three women he consider to be close friends, perhaps he'll continue to pour himself into some leather pants and attack uchiha-san with a nice whip? *not that i'm hoping or anything... * the party was a clever idea, i liked it.
you're full of creative inventiveness. *loves you* i think one day i'm going to just have to kidnap you and make you write for my enjoyment. *insert evil laughter* i can not wait for the next update on this and hope that it comes quickly. much love m'dear and here's wishes for a quick update. with more sasu/naru/sasu going on...
*dies* ... it's so long...
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww!! That was such a perfect ending for this chapter! I love this story the idea for the dictionary was just pure genius! Please update and keep up the good work!
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww cute!! i like this so far its interesting. keep up
da good work. good luck w/ ur next update. AoiKitsune
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da good work. good luck w/ ur next update. AoiKitsune
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww that was so sweet. its a great fic so far. interesting with the truth dictionary. hope to read more soon.
ja ne!
ja ne!
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please dont leave it there!!! This story has so much to offer! It was really fun and heartwarming! I drooled as I imagined Naruto's getup and laughed when I thought about Kiba's "HOT"
I am glad to have you back! Glad you returned once again. Hugs and kisses, nyah! The pain never goes away but after a while it starts to heal just a bit... so yes, Great to see you!
I am glad to have you back! Glad you returned once again. Hugs and kisses, nyah! The pain never goes away but after a while it starts to heal just a bit... so yes, Great to see you!