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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that waited for this chapter...it was so sweet!
Please continue...
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Please continue...
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh My Gods!!!!!!!!
It was SO very much cute!!!!!!!! ^_^ It had me sqealing and with a guffy smile for 10 minutes stright!!!! =D
I loved this chapter!!!! Naruto was HOT! and Sasuke was... was... NYA!!!!!!!!!!! so adorably cuddly xD
Can't wait to see next chapter! ;D
Hope see you soon
Ja nE!
It was SO very much cute!!!!!!!! ^_^ It had me sqealing and with a guffy smile for 10 minutes stright!!!! =D
I loved this chapter!!!! Naruto was HOT! and Sasuke was... was... NYA!!!!!!!!!!! so adorably cuddly xD
Can't wait to see next chapter! ;D
Hope see you soon
Ja nE!
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like where you are leading this :D
A make over for Naruto! How sweet ^.^
And the last line of that chapter totally got me !
Write more, your story could become *really* interesting!
PS : don't listen to 'Menow''s review! It's *your* story and you'll do what ever the fuck you want to with it. it's your idea, you're the boss! Keep that in mind. :)
A make over for Naruto! How sweet ^.^
And the last line of that chapter totally got me !
Write more, your story could become *really* interesting!
PS : don't listen to 'Menow''s review! It's *your* story and you'll do what ever the fuck you want to with it. it's your idea, you're the boss! Keep that in mind. :)
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter a lot, the ending made me almost wanna cry...i dunno why i mean it wasn't sad or anything but I also think the ending was my favorite part of this chapter. Just the same it is much better than the old chapter three, not that I can actually remember it anyway...but still the story seems to be pieced together much nicer/better now.
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sorry about the "WTF" thing i really do like the story but i kinda liked the chapter the other way (don't be mad ok)
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
he he! please update soon I love this story!
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so sweet :)
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooooh another update! YES!!!! I sooo love this story but I had almost lost hope that it would be finished and now a new chappie and I soooooo love this chappie, but out of curiosity did you redo this story or am I thinking of antothr one??? I could of sworn that the dictonary started to talk cause of some jutsu or something??? maybe I was just imagining things or it was something totally diffrent, another fic or something, anyhow love this fic, always have an I am so happy that you have not given up on it, I hope to see more chapters soon.and please excuse the gosh aweful spelling, sticky keys and all that junk, it makes my normal mistakes look even worse..sowwy bout that, anyhow ty ty ty for the update I LOVED it, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwww so you did change it...thought so lol I almost forgot the Neji thinky maybe you could use it in the next chapter, but to be honest, althoug tis totally your fic and you should write it ANYWAY you see fit, I like it better without the book being all talky and cheecky, if I do recall right, it wasnt helping Naruto to much since it was telling Naru to figure it out himself, which is opposite of what a dic is supposed to do, so I am glad you redid it and have the book back to the amazing little thing it is, but can it still stay someplace and record like all the conversation?? I really liked that feature, it was handy for when Naruto left it behind and then comes back for it later...anyhow I do love this fic, no matter which way you choose to move it, talking book or not, I loved them both..Im fickle that way..lol..huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ingenious! I would've never thought of an idea quite like this one. A magical dictionary of all things to tie people together. -giggles-