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November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very interesting story!! i like how kiba and shino brightens up hinata's day, esp akamaru!! hmmm....sasuke sounds like a possesive a** isn't he?? well, i like possesive sasuke, but he sounds so creepy in here.....so, how is naruto going to show in the story?? i wonder who is east and west?? i'm sure suna is one, the other?? sound??
anyways...update soon!!
anyways...update soon!!
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October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice Concept.I Love The Story.
However,a Little Friendly Advice : You Should Take Care Of Details...I Mean,More Detailing Adds To The Beauty Of A Story.Other Than That,It's Lovely! ^^
However,a Little Friendly Advice : You Should Take Care Of Details...I Mean,More Detailing Adds To The Beauty Of A Story.Other Than That,It's Lovely! ^^
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing!!!!!! PLEASE write more!!! i'll die with out my fix of the story! and i love how you're staying true to the characters. I can't wait until naruto comes into the picture :D
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy your story and although the chapters aren't too long they are well done.
Good luck and Best wishes.
Butterfly Beauty
Good luck and Best wishes.
Butterfly Beauty
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XDDD this is going in my squee section XDDD also, i know sasuke's emo in the original storyline, but jeez....sasuke's a possessive lil' teme in this story. i just want to slap him. is that on purpose?....good... email me when you update plz!! ^^ my email address is deannathx@comcast.net
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September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NaruxHina you know what that means?!
Sorry, but please give me some excitement!
not very good..
(i want to see NARUTO!)
Sorry, but please give me some excitement!
not very good..
(i want to see NARUTO!)
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. I'm really wondering where the plot will take us.
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story ! I'm looking forward to the appearance of the famous peasant in dirty rags. I bet it's a cute blondie with blue eyes. Lol !
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is very interesting and i cant wait for Hinata to finally meet naruto. I kinda wonder how sasuke is going to act after thier married i hope he dosent rape her!
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June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon please