rate_review Reviews

Nice fic. I like it a lot.

ohmygod ohmygod!!!!
i love this!!
it's like the fairy tales i used to read!(and still do sometimes)
i'm so excited!
i can't wait to see where this is going.

Nice writing, though I am looking forward to when the Starcrossed meet. Also, try to work on your emotional scenes a bit more.

that was good i liked it!^^

Can't wait to read the next chapter

Not a problem, turns out though, hideously cute flesh eating rabbits can't stand water in any form *Holds up a jar of furry mush*- Yep, definately good to know before you try to dominate the world with them, on little drizzle and your army's ka-put. Well, I'm off to go find something else exceptionally dangerous to threaten people with so that they'll work- my shocky monkeys are still on vacation. Later.

Excellent Story so far, keep up the good work!

Post the next chapter or else I will send upon you my- hold on for a second *opens up a closet door to reveal a wide variety of animals* let's see, used the dobermans last week, the cybernetic pandas the day before, my shockey monkey's are on vaction so I can't use them, drool monkeys, nah, their slober would fry the keyboard, Found them!- or I'll send upon you a plague of hideously cute flesh eating rabbits!

*looks behind himself and sees two of the hideously cute flesh eating rabbits sitting together.* That can't be good.

*blinks and sees two more of them* RUN FOR YOUR LIVES, THEY'VE ESCAPED!!!!

*Runs away screaming over the hills*