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for Painted

by melliemoore

schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think you build it up very nicely. The lemon was... really good at some points and.... not that good on others. But overall I really liked it. *smile*
person Rach
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great! Im so glad I found this fic! I really loved it!!! Wow, now im going to check out your other fics cuz I really enjyed this one!
person Bec
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I found this incredibly hot. And also funny, cause I just got done painting my dining room.
person Izzy
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
gawf!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i hole in the wall, oh god oh god....so.........damn.....funny rofl!!! so hard......too typeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!! heheheheheheheheheh bwahahahahmwahahahahahah hhehehehehehehehe hehe heheheheh hmmmmmpppppppphhhhhhhhhhhh gaasp, can't breath!!! oh god, deep breaths, calm down izzy calm down.....hahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaQ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! no sirwe, he's NEVER gonna here the end of it XDDDDXDXDXDXDX=D <3 it!
person Midnight Kyuubi
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn that, this had to be ome of the best fucking lemons I've ever read in my life, dammnit! I love it, I love the story...damnnit, I probably even love you!
person Christina
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Please make more stories like this <3
person aina
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thank you for writing this it was hot!! funny and entertaining...i liked the way you stayed true to their characters it really did look like something that they could do
person Hestia
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow--great job on a first lemon! May you write many more! Thanks for sharing!
person Hestia
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow--great job on a first lemon! May you write many more! Thanks for sharing!
person innerchild
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was ur first fanfic? and lemon? u gotta be shitting me. man, that was really good. funny and sexy at the same time. loved it. hope u got some other works, cause i want to read more of your stuff! :)

-inc