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for Painted

by melliemoore

person Sama
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg that was awesome girly!!!! Please you have to make another story sometime soon! Truly just...AHHHH! I loved it! Good work! ^^
person MissMayumi
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome!! ...yummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm....Please write more!!
person Clemen
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great one shot. Very funny the ending. Look forward to reading your future works. Until then, take care, and god bless.
person Cesia
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! ^o^ Really awsome! I started to choke on my reeses pieces cause it was soooo good. XD umm...the story that is...candy isn't bad tho. XD You did really good. Hope you do more. I'd love to read them.^^
person Nomme de Plume
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whatdya talk? that was HAWT! and sasuke wasn't even mad that he got paint all over him. that's love right there. i thought this was a perfect little bit of smut. keep it up!
person terranigma11
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
0_0 Whoa...did you write that while i was sleeping? Cuz i swear this wasn't here six hours ago! I cant believe that this is your first time writing a lemon, that was just too hot! And with the paint...oh Lord! I dont know how you could have possibly found a muse in my paint scene, that scene wasnt even important. I really hope you come back to writing cuz this just proves that you should! And you better! and the fact that i inspired it...i swear i'm tearing up again...

I await the day when you will release a chaptered fic, which i'm sure will be awesome! Your a refreshingly good writer. And you wont even dare giving up on it since i WILL break down your door and threaten you with a ten foot pole if that thought even just GRAZES your mind!

I better see more from you, and i'm threatening you right now by the way! Thank you so much for doing this fic, i really needed that boost in motivation, since i lose it so often. Much love! Ja!