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That was a good ole chappie! I enjoyed it, I look forward to your updates

i did enjoy this chapter! naru and sasu's first kiss moments always get me. i love them. and i thought it was hilarious that you intorduced trunks and goten. i'm sorry i can't recall if you said or not, but do they have their powers in this? will we get to meet goku?!!!! i think naruto and goku would hit it off! sorry :P

great chapter, keep it up!

This is an awesome story! great plot and its so much fun to read!

Hope you will update soon and Seasons Greetings to you!

omg! Pairings are hot. Lemon was hot. You must continue this soon! I started cracking up when Trunks and Goten appeared. lmao. simply classic. will you have other gay pairings from other anime?

can't wait for the Itachi/Kyuubi. I already know it's going to be too sexy. continue soon, babe!

Kyuu~~ I heart Yuri doujinshi but I don't lean so much towards the fic side of it, so sorry I'm no help XP. Cute chapter though! Awww I love DBZ ^^. Trunks and Goten are so awesome together ^^. I pray for more SasuNaru! Onwards I say! ... kudasai?

Unique. Fun. Excellent use of so many of the characters - plus a bit of intrigue. You ROCK! XD

yay!!!! u updated *smooches*
and may i say i lovels this chapie!!!!
i bow to the all mighty oraday!!
>.<

and yeah i agree there needs to b sum yuri
i'm a healthy horny bi girl and it would b much appreciated
lolz

i'd say a good couple would be henata and temari
but their both taken and i don't like any others....
sry i'm not much help, i hope u find a good yuri couple though

You know, there are a lot of bad writers out there, that doesn't care about spelling, grammatic describing (Seriously - some people think that 'O.o' and '=3' are an accepted form for describing in stories!!) or anything -near- a storyline. I feel myself edging more and more toward insanity each time i read a very bad written fic. I can now relax and go happy to sleep tonight, knowing, that there is another author helping me remain sane. Thank you!
You see, I read Fraternity too (and before I could review, our electricity went down. Why, God?!), and your writing is a soothing balm for me (Plus, you write some very drool-worthy scenes too *grin*). You have a strange ability to make me get a serious giggling( it can't be called laughing - it's way too hysterical and highpitched)-fit. In other words - you're great. *Sigh*. Can I please add you to my 'I-adore-and-stalk-these-people'-list?

~A very content, MiniMew

man, i love this story. i'm so glad that you updated. and yes, i love yuri, so i'll definitely send you an e-mail. i just need to think of a few, cause there really aren't that many out there. kind of sad really. but whatever. i really liked goten and trunks in this, it was so cute and hilarious. and damn, the scene between gaara and neji was hot. i can't wait until you update!

-inc

damn, i keep forgetting that the e-mail's are hidden. so uh... have you ever seen gundam wing? i'm a sucker for Relena and Hilde. i just think they're really cute together. and then from the same anime i like noin and sally or dorothy and lady une. weird pairings, but if you read a good story with those couples... then you're hooked. and then from inuyasha, i like kagome and sango. and kagura and kikyo. i've never really read any good stories with either of those pairings, so it'd be nice to see them for a change. but it would be a lot more fun and interesting, in my opinion, if they weren't in character. that way you can pretty much do whatever the hell you want with them. okay, if you need any help then u can e-mail me at darkwriter15@hotmail.com.

later,
inc