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for Gay Day

by oraday

person OKita1209
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG Thank you for all the wonderful comments you made about my stuff! I'm still waiting for you to send me a manuscript for the next chapter if you still want me to beta for you. Your story is awesome, even withour my input ^-^
person airhead622
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
soooooooo yeh i like ur other stories
that's what convinced me to read this one
it has mucho potential
sooo plllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
u write smut so well!!!!
it's a shame not to continue the story don't ya think???
person SoulKitsune
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! You sooooo have to finish this for me! Pwease? **gives you the puppy eyes and pout** I love it si far. Keep up the good work! =^-^= b
person Nomme de Plume
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i don't know why i kept passing this story up, but now that i've read it, i'm extremely glad that i did! it's got a cool storyline, and hey, what can't be good about a huge group of gay/bisexual smexy naruto characters in an amusement park full of food, fun, and flirting?! i do hope you update soon!
person Cindy
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more, more~!

good fun . . . awaiting smexy smut Oo
person sadistickiss
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Gay cuteness XD! Adorable story ^^. I love a flirtacious Naruto ; ]. Update soon ^^.
person Kisu
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Homg awesome.
Update soon!!!
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please contuine I want to see what happens. It so cute. PLEASE!
person TenshiXXX
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDAAAAAAAAAAATE!This is soooooooooooooooooooooo cool!
person Hellagoddess
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man that was funny...especially the line "“That was a terrible throw. I had to let go of Iruka's butt to catch that,” Kakashi complained."


I could so imagine him saying that! Come on! Next chapter!