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for The Sickness

by koea

schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay!

Vive le fluff
Vive le GaaLee

Vive le UPDATES!
person animekid
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
didn't know if I reviewed this or not so I finally got off my ass and did it

really interesting concept story! I really like gaara's character so far; please make more!

wouldn't mind seeing lee as doctor and the more involving relationship between the two

oh and....lemons as well but that's just me being a nutcase...and liking seme gaara *Smacks herself* actually I don't care who is on top, but people usually want lee since he is older and what not...

but...lee acts like an uke so it's two and two! XD

still continue please...would like to see how suna retaliates to the diease...sounds like chickenpox or the measles.
person Linkin Fantasy
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, the flee likes where this is going. I can't wait to read more- nothing worse than when your fic goes into the damned place incorrectly, so I know your pain.
person Shinigami24
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*cheers* Good! I hate angst! And I have had enough angst to last me a lifetime! I need to read something to cheer me up! Gomen, but for some reason some writers decied to write angsty SasuNaru...*twitching* PLS continue!
person Hestia
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cute! I like Gaara being so jealous of Gai! Lee's kneeling kind of threw me for a second--I thought you were going right for the oral sex, and it seemed abrupt--but oops, just my overactive imagination! It seems to be progressing well--Thanks for the new chapter!
person MeLaiya
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Im loving this. It actually has a plot. Though there are a couple grammatical errors it doesnt take away from the piece in the least. Please keep up the good work and update soon. Can wait to see what happens next.
person Shinigami24
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Question-IS Sasuke still with Orchimaru or did Naruto succeed into dragging his sorry ass back to Leaf? As for Lee-*winces* Ouch! Hopefully Gaara will help Lee overcome his fear!
person Passing Reader
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dont be embarressed it was an honest mistake ;p
Like the story by the way! Love the way you portrayed Lee and I cant wait to see where you go with it! XD
person Melaiya
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Im loving this so far. Hurry and update and keep up the good work.