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oh, masterfully done. i don't drool, but i did, know that i probably would have. it kinda makes me wary of what you have planned for them. and std? an unexpected pregnancy? a car accident? well, whatever it is, i can't wait for the next chapter. update soon!

I bet I can guess why! *winks* Sai, you lucky boy!

Omg I really loved that chapter! I'm not one to talk because I've done it with a couple too but my question is, isn't that going a little too fast? You said so before...but...O.o why am I complaining? LEMON PEOPLE! YAY! Update soon! LOL and I hope Neji gets his man *wiggles brows* tehe! You should do that in the next chapter or so! Just a suggestion! Ttul!

I like how this story is turning out. People railed against cliches and such for some time, but every once in a while I still like to see the story that starts with 'love/lust at first sight'.

I also like how in-character you keep Naruto and Sasuke. You don't have Naruto as 'uke' because he's weak/innocent/traumatized/has-to-be-dominated-by-Sasuke, but simply because it's his preference. Outside he's still strong and capable and 'the life of the party'. I'm usually a little wearing of reading SasuNaru because most often people sacrifice some of Naruto's character to make him 'uke' and you didn't. Naruto is very aware of his sexuality, which seems to be the main thing people get rid of. Your Naruto is neither 'innocent' or 'naive'. He's mature and yet still himself. Great Job.

The only thing I thought I should point out was that in CH1 after Sasuke sees Naruto it's mentioned that he's never had any relationship with a girl or boy and didn't think about it at all. In CH3 Sasuke thinks about how relaxed Naruto is compared to other people he's had sex with. It's a little confusing and perhaps you could explain it more. Was Sasuke supposed to be a virgin? Or did he just mean he'd only had sex with people and never stuck around afterwards?

O_O omg that was so good and smexy!!!. I never seen Naruto being suck a seme before....but in the end he was an uke again. I cant wait to see what happens next. oh yeah and for some reason i read the last sentence wrondg. I thought it said...."Neji never came home" I was like OMG NEJI IS DEAD LOL silly me

-giggles- i bet neji got laid by sai!

AAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!
This makes my day!!!
You have no idea how much this makes my day!!
Just keep them cumming and I will be happy!!
You are doing a great job so far!!

wonderfully written, please update soon, i don't want to go through withdrawl...:0

how i like it? lol not sure wut thats supposed to mean, but im pretty sure i dont like it as 'hard' as Naruto does...anywho just read the first chapter and i have to say...im in love...with this story....if thats possible, great job, keep it up!

Hi, love the story!! I like highschool and college fanfictions, there an nice change. LOL...and on your authors note I did curse some (yes we all hate author notes...lol) Then I read where you put " ok curse now " LOL ;0) Good job and keep up the work, and Update soon!!!!