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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
::screams in joy:: soooo.... hmm whats the word... great? Yes! love the smex! it really is a good word XD
Hinata-chan
Hinata-chan
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, nice story, update soon please. :D
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! I loved the banter between the boys in the beginning. Very believeable. :) Your style of writing is easy to read. Keep up the good work!
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty rushed, but not bad :D.
I laughed quite a bit ^_^.
More?
I laughed quite a bit ^_^.
More?
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I love it! It's very interesting and I can't wait for the next chapter. Have you ever read spartan Ninjas? I loved that fic and it was the same setting as this almost. But this fic is a little different but in a good way.It's original and I can't help but squeal in fangirlish joy at the thought of what might come next. Please keep up the good work!
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. that was just yummy! i am totally loving this so far. hinata's really cute too. i can hardly wait for more. looking forward to the sexiness and how the story develops =)
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
now that's hot! need more...going into withdrawal.....
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Jealous Sasuke rocks!! lol. My apologies. That scene at the park was hawwwt!! *fans face with hand* Can't WAIT for next update!
Hurry and UPDATE!
I'm beginning to get attched to this story!
Hurry and UPDATE!
I'm beginning to get attched to this story!
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!!!!!!
Why, oh why dud Itachi have to die!!!!!!!!!!! (for the sake of the script girl, deal with it)
So lovely, so beautifull, ... so short!!!!!!!! You left me craving for more!
UPDATE SOON!
Why, oh why dud Itachi have to die!!!!!!!!!!! (for the sake of the script girl, deal with it)
So lovely, so beautifull, ... so short!!!!!!!! You left me craving for more!
UPDATE SOON!
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Too, too much fun. Love the world/atmosphere you've created for them. I have never read a hotter "lemon" - and just from making out~! Yum! Please keep on!!!